外研版必修三 Unit 2 课文解析|改变世界的井(记叙文·公益助人·定语从句(with which))

Understanding ideas 课文精读 · 改变世界的井

一、课文原文及逐段翻译

第1段

1. As a six-year-old Canadian schoolboy, Ryan had trouble believing the words spoken by his teacher that many people in developing African countries couldn’t get enough clean water. He looked across the classroom at the drinking fountain. It was very close—only ten steps away. So, Ryan asked himself, “Why do some African children have to walk ten kilometres to get water every day? And why is the water so dirty that it makes them sick?” Young Ryan thought, “Life is easy for me, but hard for those people. Why don’t I help?”

1. 年仅六岁的加拿大小学生瑞安难以相信老师所说的话:在欠发达的非洲国家,许多人都喝不到足够的干净的水。他的目光掠过教室,望向对面的喷泉式饮水器,它是那么近——只有十步之遥。因此,瑞安问自己:“为什么有些非洲儿童每天要步行十公里去取水?为什么他们会因为喝了不卫生的水而生病?”年幼的瑞安想道:“我的生活很舒适,但他们的生活却那么艰难,我为什么不去帮帮他们呢?”

第2段

2. At first, his plan was to earn money to build a single well somewhere in Africa. He cleaned windows and did gardening for his family and neighbours. He soon reached his first target of $70, but when he gave the money to a charity, he was told that it actually cost $2,000 to build a well. Seventy dollars was only enough for a hand pump. Ryan understood that a hand pump wouldn’t help the children. What they needed was a well dug near their homes.

2. 起初,他的计划是赚钱在非洲挖一口井。通过帮助家人和邻居们擦窗户、做园艺,他很快就达到了他的第一个目标——70美元,但当他把这笔钱捐给慈善机构时,他才得知挖一口井实际上需要花费2,000美元。70美元只够买一个手压泵。瑞安明白一个手压泵帮不了非洲的孩子们。他们需要的是一口离家不远的井。

第3段

3. Two thousand dollars was a lot of money, but Ryan didn’t give up. He was determined to help other children have clean water. He started to ask for help from his classmates and neighbours and persuaded them to donate money. At the same time, a friend of Ryan’s mother helped make his story go public. After several months, Ryan had raised the $2,000, with which a well was built near a primary school in Uganda. The children at the school no longer needed to walk for hours to get water. They were grateful to him and invited him to visit.

3. 2,000美元可是一笔大数目,但是瑞安并没有放弃。他下定决心要帮助其他孩子获得干净的水。他开始向同学和邻居求助,说服他们捐款。与此同时,在瑞安妈妈的一位朋友的帮助下,瑞安的事为公众所知了。几个月后,瑞安筹集了2,000美元,在乌干达一所小学附近建造了一口井。这所学校的孩子们再也不用走几小时的路去打水了。他们非常感激瑞安,并邀请瑞安前来参观。

第4段

4. In Uganda, Ryan at last saw the finished well with his own eyes. But that was not all. He also saw hundreds of delighted students who had turned out to welcome him. They sang and danced happily. Some even offered him food and gifts. At first Ryan was nervous, but soon a great warmth filled him. He really had made a difference for these children. He broke into a joyful smile.

4. 在乌干达,瑞安终于亲眼看到了打好的井。不仅如此,他还看到了几百名学生兴高采烈地欢迎他。他们高兴地唱歌跳舞。有的学生还为他送上了食物和礼物。一开始瑞安还有点紧张,但很快他就感到一阵温暖。他真的改变了这些孩子的生活。他突然笑了起来。

第5段

5. Later, Ryan’s experience led him to set up a foundation to encourage more people to help. Many inspired people gave him their support. Ryan’s foundation continues to attract support from more and more people, so the work of building more wells can go on. Today, over 800,000 people in 16 countries across Africa have benefited from the life-changing gift of clean, safe water.

5. 后来,这段经历促使瑞安建立了一个基金会,以鼓励更多的人提供帮助。许多深受鼓舞的人都给与瑞安支持。瑞安的基金会不断吸引着越来越多的人给予帮助,从而使打井事业能够继续。如今,这份能改变人一生的礼物——干净卫生的水——已经惠及了非洲16个国家的80多万人。

第6段

6. Now, as an adult, Ryan says that the question to ask is not “Why don’t I help?”, but “How can I help today?”. This insight grew from the determined attitude of a six-year-old boy who had the courage and perseverance to make his dream a reality.

6. 如今,瑞安已长大成人,他不再问“我为什么不去帮助他们?”,而是“如今我该如何去帮助他们?”。这份领悟,始于一个有勇气和毅力实现梦想的六岁男孩那颗坚定不移的心。

二、重点单词

charity n.:慈善机构;慈善。when he gave the money to a charity.

target n.:目标。He soon reached his first target of $70.

determined adj.:下定决心的;坚定的。He was determined to help.

persuade v.:说服;劝说。persuaded them to donate money.

donate v.:捐赠;捐献。donate money.

grateful adj.:感激的;感谢的。They were grateful to him.

delighted adj.:高兴的;欣喜的。hundreds of delighted students.

foundation n.:基金会;基础。set up a foundation.

inspire v.:鼓舞;激励。Many inspired people gave support.

benefit v.:受益;得益于。have benefited from the gift.

perseverance n.:毅力;坚持不懈。the courage and perseverance.

reality n.:现实;实际。make his dream a reality.

insight n.:领悟;洞见。This insight grew from...

attitude n.:态度。the determined attitude.

三、一词多义与熟词生义

target 常见义为“靶子、目标(被攻击/瞄准的对象)”,课文 first target of $70 指“(要达成的)目标金额”,偏积极义。

well 常见义为副词“好”,课文 build a well 作名词“水井”,是本文核心词。

public 常见义为形容词“公众的”,go public 是短语,意为“公开、为公众所知”。

foundation 常见义“地基、基础”,课文 set up a foundation 指具体的“基金会(慈善组织)”。

benefit 常见义为名词“好处、益处”,课文 have benefited from 作动词“受益、得益”。

reality 常见义“现实(与幻想相对)”,make one’s dream a reality 是固定搭配,意为“把梦想变为现实”。

四、重点词块

have trouble (in) doing 做某事有困难

developing countries 发展中国家

drinking fountain 喷泉式饮水器

earn money 赚钱

do gardening 做园艺(工作)

at first 起初;一开始

ask for help 求助

persuade sb to do 说服某人做某事

make one’s story go public 使某事公开/为人所知

be grateful to 对……感激

make a difference 有影响;起作用

break into a smile 突然笑起来

set up a foundation 建立基金会

benefit from 从……中受益

make one’s dream a reality 把梦想变为现实

五、长难句拆解

【原句 1】As a six-year-old Canadian schoolboy, Ryan had trouble believing the words spoken by his teacher that many people in developing African countries couldn’t get enough clean water.
【主干】Ryan had trouble believing the words.
【分层】As ... schoolboy 为介词短语作状语;spoken by his teacher 为过去分词作后置定语修饰 words;that 引导同位语从句解释 words 的具体内容。
【译文】年仅六岁的加拿大小学生瑞安难以相信老师所说的话:在欠发达的非洲国家,许多人喝不到足够的干净水。
【考点】介词短语作状语;过去分词作定语;同位语从句。

【原句 2】After several months, Ryan had raised the $2,000, with which a well was built near a primary school in Uganda.
【主干】Ryan had raised the $2,000.
【分层】After several months 时间状语;with which 引导非限制性定语从句,which 指代 $2,000,从句谓语为 was built 被动语态。
【译文】几个月后,瑞安筹集了2,000美元,用这笔钱在乌干达一所小学附近建造了一口井。
【考点】“介词 + which”非限制性定语从句;过去完成时态。

【原句 3】He also saw hundreds of delighted students who had turned out to welcome him.
【主干】He saw hundreds of delighted students.
【分层】who 引导定语从句修饰 students;turn out 此处意为“出动、现身”,to welcome him 为目的状语。
【译文】他还看到数百名兴高采烈、前来欢迎他的学生。
【考点】who 定语从句;turn out 词义;不定式目的状语。

【原句 4】Ryan’s foundation continues to attract support from more and more people, so the work of building more wells can go on.
【主干】foundation continues to attract support, so the work can go on.
【分层】of building more wells 为介词短语作后置定语修饰 work;so 引导结果状语从句,主语 the work,谓语 can go on。
【译文】瑞安的基金会持续吸引越来越多人的支持,因此打井工作得以继续。
【考点】so 引导结果状语从句;介词短语作后置定语。

【原句 5】This insight grew from the determined attitude of a six-year-old boy who had the courage and perseverance to make his dream a reality.
【主干】This insight grew from the attitude.
【分层】of a six-year-old boy 作后置定语;who 引导定语从句修饰 boy;to make his dream a reality 为不定式作后置定语修饰 courage and perseverance。
【译文】这份领悟源于一个六岁男孩那坚定不移的态度,他拥有把梦想变成现实的勇气与毅力。
【考点】who 定语从句;不定式作后置定语;make + 宾语 + 宾补。

六、语法点清单

1. 同位语从句(that)
the words that many people ... couldn’t get ...,that 解释 words 内容,注意与定语从句区分。

2. “介词 + which”非限制性定语从句
with which a well was built,which 指代前面名词,介词由搭配决定。

3. 过去分词作定语/状语
spoken by his teacher;delighted students。表被动、完成。

4. 一般过去时与过去完成时
had raised(筹款发生在“建井”之前,过去的过去);saw / was built 为一般过去。

5. 不定式作目的/后置定语
to welcome him;to make his dream a reality;to help other children。

6. not ... but ... 并列结构
the question is not “Why ...?”, but “How ...?”,否定前者肯定后者,表转折强调。

七、逻辑链

缘起(第1段):六岁瑞安听老师说非洲缺水 → 对比身边饮水器,立志帮忙

↓

受挫(第2段):攒70美元才发现打井需2000 → 明白手压泵不够,需真正的井

↓

行动(第3段):不放弃、求助邻里、故事公开 → 筹满款、乌干达建井、孩子感恩

↓

见证(第4段):亲见水井与欢呼学生 → 感到温暖、确认自己改变了他人

↓

升华(第5—6段):成立基金会惠及80万人 → 成年后把“为何不帮”转为“如何帮”

这是一篇“个人经历+精神成长”的记叙文。 第1—2段铺陈动机与最初困难(认知落差、资金鸿沟);第3—4段是核心行动与情感回报,体现“从小我到大爱”;第5—6段收束于影响扩大与思想升华,从具体事件提炼出坚持与奉献的主题。

八、写作迁移

模板 1:As a ..., 主语 + had trouble (in) doing ...
课文:As a six-year-old Canadian schoolboy, Ryan had trouble believing the words.
仿写:As a newcomer, she had trouble fitting into the new class.(作为插班生,她很难融入新集体。)——用于交代身份与初始困难。

模板 2:He was determined to ...
课文:He was determined to help other children have clean water.
仿写:He was determined to realise his ambition of becoming a doctor.(他下定决心实现当医生的志向。)——用于表达坚定决心。

模板 3:persuade sb to do ...
课文:He persuaded them to donate money.
仿写:She persuaded her parents to support her plan.(她说通父母支持她的计划。)——用于写说服他人的过程。

模板 4:... make a difference (for sb)
课文:He really had made a difference for these children.
仿写:A small act of kindness can make a difference in someone’s life.(一个小小的善举能改变某人的一生。)——用于点明行为意义。

模板 5:The question is not “...?”, but “...?”
课文:the question to ask is not “Why don’t I help?”, but “How can I help today?”
仿写:The real question is not “Can I do it?”, but “When shall I start?”(真正的问题不是“我能不能做”,而是“我何时开始”。)——用于转折升华主题。

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