Using Language 课文精读 · 一个纯思维的世界(霍金)
一、课文原文及逐段翻译
第1段
Stephen Hawking was one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics. Most people are familiar with images of him in his wheelchair — unable to move and using a computer to talk. He was diagnosed with a disease that weakened his muscles and left him unable to move. His world became a world of pure thought.
史蒂芬·霍金是物理学界最著名、最具天赋的科学家之一。大多数人都很熟悉他坐在轮椅上、无法动弹、只能借助电脑说话的画面。他被诊断患有一种疾病,这种疾病使他的肌肉萎缩无力,让他无法活动。他的世界变成了一个纯粹思维的世界。
第2段
Hawking first achieved fame when he was still healthy enough to walk, as a graduate student in physics at Cambridge. In general, there were two theories about the origin of the universe: the steady state theory, which holds that the universe has no beginning or end, and the big bang theory, which holds that the universe began at a single point in space and time. The greatest supporter of the steady state concept was a Cambridge scientist, but Hawking and another Oxford scientist provided proof that the big bang theory was correct.
霍金最早成名是在他身体健康尚可行走之时,那时他是剑桥大学的物理学研究生。总的来说,关于宇宙起源有两种理论:一种是稳恒态理论,认为宇宙无始无终;另一种是大爆炸理论,认为宇宙始于时空中的某一点。稳恒态概念最有力的支持者是一位剑桥科学家,但霍金与另一位牛津科学家提供了证据,证明大爆炸理论是正确的。
第3段
So, what made Stephen Hawking a genius? Besides being brilliant, he was brave, though sometimes careless in what he said and did. He dared to say what others were afraid to say, and dream what others were afraid to dream. In addition, he was determined. This quality helped him to succeed, both as a scientist and as a fighter against his disease.
那么,是什么让史蒂芬·霍金成为天才的呢?除了才华横溢,他也很勇敢,尽管有时言行比较随意。他敢于说出别人不敢说的话,敢于做别人不敢做的梦。此外,他意志坚定。这种品质帮助他取得成功——既作为一名科学家,也作为一名与疾病抗争的斗士。
二、重点单词
gifted adj.:有天赋的;有才华的。one of the most gifted scientists
familiar adj.:熟悉的。be familiar with images of him
diagnose v.:诊断。be diagnosed with a disease(被诊断患有疾病)
weaken v.:使虚弱;削弱。weakened his muscles(使肌肉萎缩)
muscle n.:肌肉。weakened his muscles
fame n.:名声;名望。first achieved fame(最早成名)
origin n.:起源;起因。the origin of the universe(宇宙起源)
universe n.:宇宙。the origin of the universe
steady adj.:稳定的;平稳的。the steady state theory(稳恒态理论)
concept n.:概念;观念。the steady state concept
brilliant adj.:才华横溢的;聪颖的。Besides being brilliant
careless adj.:粗心的;随意的。sometimes careless in what he said
dare v.:敢于。He dared to say ...
determined adj.:坚定的;有决心的。he was determined
quality n.:品质;特质。This quality helped him
fighter n.:斗士;战士。a fighter against his disease
三、一词多义与熟词生义
steady 常见义"平稳的、稳固的(物体/速度)",课文 steady state theory 为宇宙学术语"稳恒态理论"。
quality 常见义"质量(产品优劣)",课文 This quality 指人的"品质、特质"。
fighter 常见义"战士、格斗者",课文 a fighter against his disease 引申为"与病魔抗争的人"。
brilliant 常见义"明亮的、灿烂的(光/颜色)",课文指人"才华横溢的、杰出的"。
careless 常见义"粗心的、疏忽的(贬义)",课文 though sometimes careless in what he said or did 弱化为"随意的、不拘小节的",带中性色彩。
四、重点词块
be familiar with 对……熟悉
in one’s wheelchair 坐在轮椅上
be diagnosed with 被诊断患有(疾病)
achieve fame 成名;获得声誉
healthy enough to walk 健康得足以行走
in general 总的来说;大体上
the origin of the universe 宇宙的起源
hold that 认为;主张(后接从句)
no beginning or end 无始无终
provide proof that 提供……的证据(that 同位/宾从)
besides being ... 除了……之外(还)
dare to do 敢于做
be afraid to do 不敢做;害怕做
in addition 此外;另外
both as ... and as ... 既作为……也作为……
五、长难句拆解
【原句 1】Most people are familiar with images of him in his wheelchair — unable to move and using a computer to talk.
【主干】Most people are familiar with images of him.
【分层】in his wheelchair 为介词短语作后置定语修饰 him;破折号后 unable to move 与 using a computer to talk 为并列的补充说明成分(省略主语 he),解释 images 的具体内容。
【译文】大多数人都很熟悉他坐在轮椅上、无法动弹、只能借助电脑说话的画面。
【考点】介词短语后置定语;破折号补充说明;现在分词/形容词短语作补语。
【原句 2】He was diagnosed with a disease that weakened his muscles and left him unable to move.
【主干】He was diagnosed with a disease.
【分层】that weakened ... and left ... 为定语从句修饰 disease;weakened 与 left 为并列谓语;leave him unable to move 为"leave + 宾语 + 宾语补足语(形容词)"结构。
【译文】他被诊断患有一种疾病,这种疾病使他的肌肉萎缩,让他无法活动。
【考点】that 定语从句;并列谓语;leave + 宾 + 宾补。
【原句 3】In general, there were two theories about the origin of the universe: the steady state theory, which holds that the universe has no beginning or end, and the big bang theory, which holds that the universe began at a single point in space and time.
【主干】there were two theories about the origin of the universe.
【分层】冒号后列举两种理论;each theory 后接 which holds that ... 非限制性定语从句,其中 that 引导宾语从句(has no beginning or end / began at a single point)。
【译文】总的来说,关于宇宙起源有两种理论:稳恒态理论(认为宇宙无始无终)和大爆炸理论(认为宇宙始于时空中的某一点)。
【考点】there be 结构;非限制性定语从句嵌套 that 宾语从句;平行列举。
【原句 4】Hawking first achieved fame when he was still healthy enough to walk, as a graduate student in physics at Cambridge.
【主干】Hawking first achieved fame.
【分层】when 引导时间状语从句,healthy enough to walk 为"形容词 + enough + to do";as a graduate student ... 为 as 介词短语作伴随/身份状语。
【译文】霍金最早成名是在他身体健康尚可行走之时,那时他是剑桥大学的物理学研究生。
【考点】when 时间状语从句;enough to do;as 表身份。
【原句 5】He dared to say what others were afraid to say, and dream what others were afraid to dream.
【主干】He dared to say ... and (dared to) dream ...
【分层】say 与 dream 为平行谓语动词(后者省略 dared to);what others were afraid to say/dream 为 what 引导的宾语从句,作 say/dream 的宾语。
【译文】他敢于说出别人不敢说的话,敢于做别人不敢做的梦。
【考点】what 宾语从句;平行结构(say ... and dream ...);be afraid to do。
六、语法点清单
1. 一般过去时与叙事时态
全文用一般过去时讲述霍金生平(was, achieved, provided, helped),是人物传记的时态基础。
2. 定语从句(that / which)
that weakened his muscles ...(限制性);which holds that ...(非限制性,两套并列)。注意 which 指代 theory。
3. 破折号与补充说明
images of him in his wheelchair — unable to move and using a computer to talk,破折号引出对前文的解释性补充。
4. 让步状语从句(though)
he was brave, though sometimes careless in what he said and did。though 表"尽管",从句省略主语 he 与 was。
5. what 引导宾语从句
what others were afraid to say / dream。what 兼具"连接词 + 先行词"功能,指"……的话/梦"。
6. 平行结构(say ... and dream ...)
He dared to say ... and (dared to) dream ...,后项承前省略,形成气势对仗,是人物特写常用修辞。
七、逻辑链
现象(第1段):霍金身困轮椅却思想自由——"纯思维的世界"
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成就(第2段):剑桥研究生时期成名,以证据支持"大爆炸"击败"稳恒态"
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归因(第3段):天才 = 才华 + 勇敢(敢说敢梦)+ 坚定(抗病亦成斗士)
这是一篇短小精悍的"人物特写":第1段用反差(肉体受限 vs 思想自由)立象;第2段以具体科学贡献佐证其"天才";第3段用设问"what made him a genius"提炼精神品质,收束于"科学家 + 抗病斗士"的双重身份。
八、写作迁移
模板 1:Most people are familiar with ...
课文:Most people are familiar with images of him in his wheelchair.
仿写:Most people are familiar with the story of his rise from poverty.(大多数人都熟悉他从贫寒中崛起的故事。)——用于引出广为人知的人物形象。
模板 2:He was diagnosed with a disease that ...
课文:He was diagnosed with a disease that weakened his muscles and left him unable to move.
仿写:She was diagnosed with a condition that tested her will and changed her life.(她被诊断患有一种考验意志、改变人生的病症。)——用于叙述健康转折。
模板 3:In general, there were two theories about ...
课文:there were two theories about the origin of the universe.
仿写:In general, there were two theories about the cause of the accident.(总的来说,关于事故原因有两种理论。)——用于分类呈现观点。
模板 4:Besides being ..., he was ...
课文:Besides being brilliant, he was brave.
仿写:Besides being talented, he was hard-working.(除了有天赋,他还很勤奋。)——用于多维度描述人物。
模板 5:He dared to say what others were afraid to say, and dream what others were afraid to dream.
课文:He dared to say what others were afraid to say, and dream what others were afraid to dream.
仿写:She dared to do what others were afraid to do, and become what others were afraid to become.(她敢于做别人不敢做的事,成为别人不敢成为的人。)——用于刻画勇气与突破。
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