外研版选择性必修四 Unit 4 课文解析|创业之花(记叙文·创业历程·分词作状语/强调句)

Understanding ideas 课文精读 · 创业之花

一、课文原文及逐段翻译

第1段

As she spoke, Zhang Yue put her hands behind her back to hide that they were shaking. She couldn't, however, hide the line of sweat running down her forehead, which was caused partly by the heat of the television studio, but more by fear of the four people seated in front of her. They stared back, their blank faces giving no clue as to what they would say next. Feeling dizzy, Zhang Yue took a deep breath as she struggled to finish her presentation, "And that is why I need your help in turning my new and exciting business into a successful one."

发言时,张悦把手藏在背后,以掩饰双手的颤抖。但她无法掩饰从额头淌下的一行汗水。这一部分是由于电视演播室里有些热,但更多的则是由于她害怕坐在她面前的四个人。他们面无表情地凝视着她,让人根本看不出他们接下来会说什么。张悦感到一阵眩晕,做了个深呼吸,然后努力完成她的陈述:"这就是为什么我需要你们的帮助,使这个全新的、激动人心的创业项目获得成功。"

第2段

Now chairwoman of her own company, Zhang Yue is fond of saying, "The early bird catches the worm." The place where this happens is a valley, a world away from any television studio. Moving carefully through the darkness, she passes row upon row of rose plants. In an hour, these fields will be full of people, working quickly to pick the flowers before sunrise. "It has to be done then," says Zhang. "These flowers are delicate."

张悦现在是自己公司的总裁,她总喜欢说:"早起的鸟儿有虫吃。"她创业的地点在一个山谷里,这是一个远离任何电视演播室的世界。她小心地在黑暗中穿行,经过一排又一排的玫瑰植株。一小时后就会有许多人来到这里,趁着日出前的时间快速采摘玫瑰花。"必须在那个时候采。"张悦说,"这些花是很娇嫩的。"

第3段

Zhang never thought that this was something she would end up doing. Surrounded by roses as she was growing up, she paid them little attention. It was only after graduating from university overseas and returning to visit her parents that Zhang realised the potential. "Conditions are ideal here," she says. "This is a place where roses grow wild."

张悦以前从未想过自己会做这一行。她从小到大,到处都是玫瑰,她很少注意到它们。直到她结束海外留学生活,回国看望父母时,才意识到这里的潜力。"这里的条件非常理想。"她说,"这里适合玫瑰自然生长。"

第4段

Zhang therefore decided to return to her home town and grow roses, which surprised many people. "I wanted to experience the freedom of being my own boss," she said. "But I also wanted to give something back to my home town. As people say, 'It takes a village to raise a child.'"

因此,张悦决定回到家乡,开始种植玫瑰,这让很多人感到惊讶。"我想体验自己当老板的自由。"她说,"同时我也想回报我的家乡。有句话说得好:'养育一个孩子需要整个村庄的力量。'"

第5段

She is not the only young person to have been bitten by the start-up bug. All over the world, an increasing number of enterprising young people are thinking of starting their own businesses, as the growing economy creates more opportunities. Like Zhang, they present their ideas in the hope of getting investment and advice, and they have the same passion and devotion. The majority meet with rejection. A few, like Zhang Yue, find themselves lucky enough to get investment and the all-important input and support from more experienced business people. The road to their success is however still a long and difficult one, with many challenges along the way.

她并不是唯一一个被创业所吸引的年轻人。在世界各地,经济的不断增长创造了更多的机会,越来越多有事业心的年轻人开始考虑自己创业。像张悦一样,他们表达自己的想法,希望以此获得投资和建议。而且,他们也拥有同样的热情和为事业奉献的决心。他们中的大多数会遭到拒绝,但包括张悦在内的少数人会非常幸运地获得投资,并从更有经验的商界人士那里获得非常关键的投入和支持。不过他们的成功之路仍然漫长而艰难,路上会遇到许多挑战。

第6段

As someone who grew up in the country, Zhang already knew about growing plants. However, like any entrepreneur who was just starting out, she still had a lot to learn. She has overcome a number of obstacles in nursing her business to the success it is today. "The biggest challenge at the initial phase was to persuade people to work for me, which was totally outside my experience. Few in the village believed I could create a multi-million yuan business from flowers," says Zhang. "After I went on TV, a major Asian manufacturer of cosmetics was willing to purchase my product and help with its distribution. It was only then that the locals began to believe me. Now my product is one of the best in Asia. This year, I can pay all my fellow workers a decent bonus."

作为一个在农村长大的人,张悦已经比较了解作物种植。不过,跟所有刚起步的企业家一样,她要学的还有很多。为了取得今天的成就,她精心打理生意,克服了许多障碍。"在初始阶段,最大的挑战就是说服人们来为我工作,这完全超出了我的经验范围。村里几乎没人相信我能从花卉生意中赚到几百万元。"张悦说,"我上了电视后,一家亚洲大型化妆品制造商表示愿意购买我的产品并且帮忙分销。直到那时本地人才开始相信我。现在我提供的是亚洲最好的产品之一。今年,我可以给我的同事们发一笔丰厚的奖金了。"

第7段

Seeing her peers who also dream of success and independence, Zhang has mixed feelings. Though she welcomes the new entrepreneurial spirit, she advises that people be realistic and seek guidance from expert consultants before rushing into things.

看到同龄人也梦想着成功和独立,张悦的心情很复杂。尽管她希望看到新的创业精神的涌现,但她也建议他们要现实一些,在仓促行事之前先寻求专业顾问的指导。

第8段

"I love running my own business, but it's not for everyone," says Zhang. "To succeed in business, you need more than a good idea, hard work and determination. What really matters is a sound business plan, access to capital, and good management and negotiating skills. Most of all, don't be too ambitious. You should know your own limits and those of the people you work with. For young people who have little life experience, that can be a challenge."

"我热爱经营自己的生意,但不是每个人都适合做这个。"张悦说,"要想在事业上取得成功,你需要的不仅仅是好的理念、勤奋和决心。真正重要的是一个合理的商业计划,获得资金的渠道,以及良好的管理和谈判技巧。最重要的是,不要野心太大。你得知道自己的极限,还有与你共事的人的极限。对于缺乏生活经验的年轻人来说这可能是个挑战。"

二、重点单词

presentation n.:陈述;演示;展示。struggled to finish her presentation(努力完成她的陈述)

delicate adj.:娇嫩的;脆弱的。These flowers are delicate(这些花很娇嫩)

potential n.:潜力;潜能。Zhang realised the potential(张悦意识到了潜力)

bitten v.:bite 的过去分词;be bitten by 喻"被……吸引/迷住"。been bitten by the start-up bug(被创业热情吸引)

enterprising adj.:有事业心的;有魄力的。enterprising young people(有事业心的年轻人)

devotion n.:奉献;投入。the same passion and devotion(同样的热情与投入)

rejection n.:拒绝;否决。The majority meet with rejection(大多数人遭到拒绝)

obstacle n.:障碍;阻碍。overcome a number of obstacles(克服许多障碍)

initial adj.:最初的;初始的。at the initial phase(在初始阶段)

manufacturer n.:制造商;厂商。a major Asian manufacturer of cosmetics(亚洲大型化妆品制造商)

distribution n.:分销;分配。help with its distribution(帮忙分销)

consultant n.:顾问。seek guidance from expert consultants(向专家顾问寻求指导)

negotiating adj.:谈判的。good management and negotiating skills(良好的管理与谈判技巧)

ambitious adj.:野心大的;抱负过高的。don't be too ambitious(别太好高骛远)

三、一词多义与熟词生义

bug 常见义为名词"昆虫、小虫",课文中 the start-up bug 为比喻用法,指"对创业的狂热/执念",be bitten by the bug 意为"被……迷住、上瘾"。

worm 本义"蠕虫",The early bird catches the worm 为谚语,worm 喻指"先到者所得的好处、机会",整句意为"早起的鸟儿有虫吃(捷足先登)"。

raise 常见义"举起、提高",It takes a village to raise a child 中 raise 意为"养育、抚养",为固定谚语表达。

delicate 可指"精致的、易碎的",也可指"(身体)娇弱的";课文中 These flowers are delicate 指花朵"娇嫩、需趁早采",兼含"易损"义。

input 常见义为计算机"输入",课文中 the all-important input and support 转为一般义"投入、贡献",指资深人士提供的资源与帮助。

sound 常见义为名词"声音"或形容词"合理的、可靠的",课文中 a sound business plan 取形容词"稳妥的、合理的"义,修饰计划。

四、重点词块

put one's hands behind one's back 把手藏在背后

hide that they were shaking 掩饰双手的颤抖

a world away from 与……截然不同的世界;远离

row upon row of 一排又一排的

end up doing 最终做……;以……告终

grow wild 野生;自然生长

give something back to 回报……

be bitten by the start-up bug 被创业热情吸引

in the hope of 怀着……的希望

meet with rejection 遭到拒绝

just starting out 刚刚起步

nurse one's business to success 精心经营使生意成功

outside one's experience 超出某人的经验范围

it was only then that 直到那时才……

rush into things 仓促行事

五、长难句拆解

【原句 1】She couldn't, however, hide the line of sweat running down her forehead, which was caused partly by the heat of the television studio, but more by fear of the four people seated in front of her.
【主干】She couldn't hide the line of sweat.
【分层】however 为插入副词表转折;running down her forehead 为现在分词作后置定语修饰 sweat;which 引导非限制性定语从句修饰 sweat,从句中含 partly by ... but more by ... 并列原因状语;seated in front of her 为过去分词作后置定语修饰 people。
【译文】但她无法掩饰从额头淌下的一行汗水,这部分由于演播室的热,更多是由于她害怕坐在面前的四个人。
【考点】插入副词;现在分词作定语;which 非限制定语从句;分词 seated 作定语。

【原句 2】It was only after graduating from university overseas and returning to visit her parents that Zhang realised the potential.
【主干】It was ... that Zhang realised the potential.(强调句)
【分层】It was ... that ... 为强调句型,强调时间状语 only after graduating ... and returning ...;after 后接两个动名词 graduating 与 returning 并列作宾语。
【译文】直到她结束海外留学生活、回国看望父母时,张悦才意识到这里的潜力。
【考点】It is / was ... that 强调句;after + 动名词并列。

【原句 3】Like Zhang, they present their ideas in the hope of getting investment and advice, and they have the same passion and devotion.
【主干】they present their ideas, and they have the same passion and devotion.
【分层】Like Zhang 为介词短语作比较状语;in the hope of getting ... 为介词短语作目的状语,of 后接动名词 getting;and 连接两个并列分句。
【译文】像张悦一样,他们表达自己的想法,希望以此获得投资和建议,并且拥有同样的热情与投入。
【考点】like 介词表"像";in the hope of + 动名词;并列句。

【原句 4】The biggest challenge at the initial phase was to persuade people to work for me, which was totally outside my experience.
【主干】The biggest challenge was to persuade people.
【分层】at the initial phase 为介词短语作后置定语;to persuade ... 为不定式作表语;which 引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面整句,was 后为介词短语 outside my experience 作表语。
【译文】在初始阶段,最大的挑战就是说服人们来为我工作,这完全超出了我的经验范围。
【考点】不定式作表语;which 非限制定语从句(指代主句)。

【原句 5】What really matters is a sound business plan, access to capital, and good management and negotiating skills.
【主干】What really matters is a plan, access and skills.(主语从句 + 表语)
【分层】What really matters 为主语从句,what 在从句中作主语;is 后为三个并列名词短语作表语(a sound business plan / access to capital / good ... skills)。
【译文】真正重要的是一个稳妥的商业计划、获取资金的渠道,以及良好的管理与谈判技巧。
【考点】what 主语从句;并列表语;access to 搭配。

六、语法点清单

1. 非谓语动词(现在/过去分词作定语与状语)
the sweat running down ...(现在分词);the four people seated ...(过去分词);Moving carefully ...(现在分词作状语);Feeling dizzy ...。注意 doing 表主动进行、done 表被动完成。

2. 强调句型(It is / was ... that ...)
It was only after ... that Zhang realised ...;It was only then that the locals began to believe me。强调时间状语,that 不可换 who/which。

3. 定语从句(which / that 非限制性)
which was caused by ...;which was totally outside my experience(which 指代主句);a place where roses grow wild(where 作状语)。

4. 动名词作宾语 / 介词宾语
after graduating ... and returning ...;in the hope of getting ...;before rushing into things。介词后须用动名词。

5. 建议与虚拟语气
she advises that people be realistic(advise that + 动词原形虚拟);don't be too ambitious(祈使否定)。注意 advise/suggest 后 that 从句用原形。

6. 比较与比喻(as ... as / like)
a world away from any television studio;Like Zhang;more by fear ... than by heat。as ... as 与 like 表比较,more ... than 表优先原因。

七、逻辑链

开场(第1段):张悦路演紧张冒汗 → 向四位投资人求助,点出"创业"主题

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现状(第2段):今为总裁,山谷种玫瑰、"早起才有虫吃"

↓

缘起(第3—4段):自幼伴玫瑰却未在意 → 留学归国见潜力,返乡创业、回报家乡

↓

群像(第5段):不止她一人"被创业吸引" → 多数遭拒、少数获投,成功路仍漫长

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攻坚(第6段):克服障碍,上电视获厂商合作 → 产品成亚洲顶尖、发奖金

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寄语(第7—8段):心情复杂仍倡务实 → 成功需计划、资本、管理与自知之明

这是一篇"人物励志/创业叙事":第1—2段以张力开场并交代现状;第3—6段按"缘起—群体背景—具体攻坚"展开,是核心叙事;第7—8段升华,借张悦之口给出创业忠告,由个人故事通向普遍启示。

八、写作迁移

模板 1:As she spoke, ... put ... behind ... to hide that ...
课文:As she spoke, Zhang Yue put her hands behind her back to hide that they were shaking.
仿写:As he spoke, the boy put his trembling hands behind his back to hide that they were shaking.(他发言时把手藏在背后,掩饰双手的颤抖。)——用于描写紧张神态与掩饰动作。

模板 2:It was only after ... that ... realised ...
课文:It was only after graduating overseas and returning to visit her parents that Zhang realised the potential.
仿写:It was only after travelling abroad that I realised the beauty of my hometown.(直到出国旅行,我才意识到家乡之美。)——用于强调"某经历之后才醒悟"。

模板 3:... is not the only one to have been bitten by ...
课文:She is not the only young person to have been bitten by the start-up bug.
仿写:He is not the only student to have been bitten by the reading bug.(他不是唯一一个迷上阅读的学生。)——用于由个体扩展到群体现象。

模板 4:It was only then that ... began to ...
课文:It was only then that the locals began to believe me.
仿写:It was only then that the crowd began to cheer.(直到那时人群才开始欢呼。)——用于强调"到某刻才发生转变"。

模板 5:What really matters is ...
课文:What really matters is a sound business plan, access to capital, and good management.
仿写:What really matters is a clear goal, persistent effort, and a calm mind.(真正重要的是清晰的目标、持久的努力与平和的心态。)——用于总结核心要素、收束观点。

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