外研版选择性必修一 Unit 6 课文解析|天路(游记散文·青藏铁路与生态保护·现在分词作状语与过去分词作定语)

Understanding ideas 课文精读 · 天路

一、课文原文及逐段翻译

第1段

Sitting back in my seat, I can’t quite believe that I’m about to travel along the railway that many foreign experts claimed was “impossible”. The train has been racing along steadily since it left Xining. All this time, the song “Sky Railway” has been playing inside my head. The words “railways like massive dragons are winding among the mountains” seem particularly vivid as I travel across the “roof of the world”.

靠坐在火车的座位上,我简直不敢相信,我将要沿着许多外国专家声称"不可能建成"的铁路旅行。火车从西宁出发,向前平稳行驶。一路上,《天路》这首歌一直在我的脑海中回响。当火车开过"世界屋脊"时,"一条条巨龙翻山越岭"的歌词显得格外生动鲜活。

第2段

I was one of the people who came from all parts of China to work on this railway. Taking years to complete, the Qinghai-Tibet Railway is a record of all of our efforts to overcome the most difficult engineering challenges. How to protect the delicate ecosystem was among the top concerns.

修建青藏铁路的工人来自全国各地,而我就是其中之一。它历时数年建成,凝聚着我们攻克种种工程难题的全部心血。其中,如何保护脆弱的生态系统是需要我们首要问题之一。

第3段

The first landmark to catch my eye is the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge, the world’s longest bridge built over permafrost. Look! A group of Tibetan antelopes is moving under the bridge, with some stopping to eat grass at their leisure. Thirty-three passages have been built under the railway to allow the animals to move safely and freely in their natural habitat. Wild animals such as these Tibetan antelopes have now been using these passages for years. They seem totally unaware that we are speeding past at over 100 kilometres an hour.

最先映入眼帘的地标性建筑是壮观的清水河大桥,它是世界上最长的高原冻土铁路桥。看!一群藏羚羊正从桥下走过,有的停下来悠闲地吃草。铁路桥下修建了三十三条野生动物通道,让动物得以在自然栖息地中安全自由地通行。就像现在的这群藏羚羊一样,野生动物们使用这些通道已有数年,它们似乎完全没有意识到我们正以每小时100多千米的速度呼啸而过。

第4段

To prevent damage to wetlands and grasslands, 675 bridges with a total length of about 160 kilometres were built between Golmud and Lhasa. We even moved 140,000 square metres of wetland to a new area in order to protect its distinct ecosystem.

为了避免破坏湿地和草原,我们在格尔木和拉萨之间建造了675座大桥,总长度约160千米。我们甚至将一块14万平方米的湿地迁往一个新的区域,以保护其独特的生态系统。

第5段

The journey has been flying by, and before I know it, we have reached Tanggula Station. Located at over 5,000 metres above sea level, this is the highest railway station in the world. In locations such as this, the thin air, changeable weather and high levels of UV radiation presented perhaps the greatest challenge for railway workers. To make sure we stayed healthy, several oxygen-making stations were constructed. We were also able to enjoy regular breaks in lower areas.

火车一路疾驰,还没等我反应过来,我们就已经到达了唐古拉车站。它位于海拔5,000多米的地方,是世界上海拔最高的火车站。在这样的高海拔环境中,稀薄的氧气,多变的天气,还有强烈的紫外线辐射,这些恐怕是我们铁路工人面临的最大挑战。为了确保工人的身体健康,我们建造了多个制氧站。我们还会定期到低海拔地区休整。

第6段

As we pass Cuona Lake, I feel a sense of pride and achievement. Using thousands and thousands of sandbags, we built a twenty-kilometre wall along the lake to protect it from construction waste. Cuona Lake is so close to the railway that I want to reach out and touch its pale blue mirror-like surface. Water birds playing in the lake, and cattle and sheep wandering the grasslands bring the scenery to life.

火车经过措那湖时,一股自豪感和成就感在我心中油然而生。当年,我们沿着措那湖边用成千上万个沙袋筑起了一道二十千米的保护墙,使它免受建筑废料的污染。现在,措那湖离火车这么近,我好想伸手去触摸它那镜面似的浅蓝色湖面。湖中嬉戏的水鸟,在草原上游荡的牛羊,让这片风景充满勃勃生机。

第7段

The Qinghai-Tibet Plateau has been attracting people’s admiration for centuries. Now, thanks to our efforts, passengers from all over the country have been enjoying these magical landscapes. I am proud that we built our “impossible” railway, and did so with the care that the environment deserves. It truly is an extraordinary “Sky Railway”.

几个世纪以来,青藏高原是无数人向往的地方。如今,由于我们的努力,来自全国各地的旅客都能亲眼观赏到这片神奇的土地。我们建成了一条"不可能建成"的铁路,并且给予当地环境充分的保护,我为此感到骄傲和自豪。青藏铁路真是一条了不起的"天路"。

二、重点单词

massive adj.:巨大的;庞大的。railways like massive dragons

claim v.:声称;断言。experts claimed was “impossible”

steady adj.:平稳的;稳定的。has been racing along steadily

delicate adj.:脆弱的;精巧的。the delicate ecosystem(脆弱的生态系统)

landmark n.:地标;标志性建筑。The first landmark to catch my eye

splendid adj.:壮观的;辉煌的。the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge

permafrost n.:永久冻土。built over permafrost

habitat n.:栖息地。in their natural habitat

unaware adj.:未察觉的;不知道的。seem totally unaware that ...

distinct adj.:独特的;不同的。its distinct ecosystem

radiation n.:辐射。high levels of UV radiation

achievement n.:成就;成绩。a sense of pride and achievement

extraordinary adj.:非凡的;杰出的。truly an extraordinary “Sky Railway”

admiration n.:钦佩;赞赏。attracting people’s admiration

deserve v.:值得;应得。the care that the environment deserves

三、一词多义与熟词生义

roof 常见义"屋顶",课文 the “roof of the world” 比喻义,指"世界屋脊"(青藏高原),为地理惯用语。

catch one’s eye 固定搭配,课文 The first landmark to catch my eye 意为"最先映入眼帘/吸引目光",catch 此处为"引起(注意)"。

passage 常见义"段落、通道(文章)",课文 Thirty-three passages 指"动物通道、过道",为具体空间义。

regular 常见义"规则的、经常的",课文 regular breaks 意为"定期的、有规律的(休息)"。

winding 由 wind(蜿蜒、盘旋)变来,课文 winding among the mountains 指"翻山越岭、蜿蜒穿行"。

deserve 常见义"应得(奖惩)",课文 the care that the environment deserves 意为"环境应得的(呵护)",表"值得被……对待"。

四、重点词块

be about to 即将;正要

claim (that) ... was impossible 声称……不可能

race along 疾驰;飞奔

play inside one’s head 在脑海中回响

the roof of the world 世界屋脊

work on 参与修建;从事

overcome challenges 克服挑战

catch one’s eye 吸引某人的目光

at one’s leisure 悠闲地;从容地

allow ... to 允许……做

in order to 为了

above sea level 海拔

thanks to 多亏;由于

so ... that 如此……以至于

bring ... to life 使……充满生机

五、长难句拆解

【原句 1】Sitting back in my seat, I can’t quite believe that I’m about to travel along the railway that many foreign experts claimed was “impossible”.
【主干】I can’t quite believe that ...
【分层】Sitting back in my seat 为现在分词短语作状语;believe 后接 that 宾语从句;该从句中 the railway 后接 that 定语从句,从句谓语 claimed 后嵌一个省略 that 的宾语从句 was “impossible”(that 在定语从句中作 claimed 的宾语)。
【译文】靠坐在火车的座位上,我简直不敢相信,我将要沿着许多外国专家声称"不可能建成"的铁路旅行。
【考点】现在分词作状语;嵌套定语从句(that 引导,内含 claimed 的宾语从句)。

【原句 2】Taking years to complete, the Qinghai-Tibet Railway is a record of all of our efforts to overcome the most difficult engineering challenges.
【主干】the Qinghai-Tibet Railway is a record of our efforts.
【分层】Taking years to complete 为现在分词短语作原因/时间状语(主动,铁路"花费数年");to overcome ... 为不定式作后置定语修饰 efforts。
【译文】它历时数年建成,凝聚着我们攻克种种工程难题的全部心血。
【考点】现在分词作状语;不定式作后置定语。

【原句 3】The first landmark to catch my eye is the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge, the world’s longest bridge built over permafrost.
【主干】The first landmark is the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge.
【分层】to catch my eye 为不定式作后置定语修饰 landmark;the world’s longest bridge 为 Qingshuihe Bridge 的同位语;built over permafrost 为过去分词短语作后置定语修饰 bridge。
【译文】最先映入眼帘的地标性建筑是壮观的清水河大桥,它是世界上最长的高原冻土铁路桥。
【考点】不定式作后置定语;同位语;过去分词 built 作定语。

【原句 4】Thirty-three passages have been built under the railway to allow the animals to move safely and freely in their natural habitat.
【主干】Thirty-three passages have been built.
【分层】under the railway 为地点状语;to allow ... 为不定式作目的状语,其中 to move ... 为宾语 the animals 的补足语。
【译文】铁路桥下修建了三十三条野生动物通道,让动物得以在自然栖息地中安全自由地通行。
【考点】现在完成时被动语态;不定式目的状语;allow + 宾语 + to do。

【原句 5】Located at over 5,000 metres above sea level, this is the highest railway station in the world.
【主干】this is the highest railway station.
【分层】Located at ... 为过去分词短语作状语(表被动、状态),逻辑主语 this 与 locate 为被动关系;above sea level 为介词短语作状语。
【译文】它位于海拔5,000多米的地方,是世界上海拔最高的火车站。
【考点】过去分词 located 作状语(被动);介词短语作状语。

六、语法点清单

1. 现在分词作状语
Sitting back in my seat;Taking years to complete;Using thousands of sandbags。表主动、伴随或原因。

2. 过去分词作定语/状语
built over permafrost;Located at ...。表被动、完成或状态(be located 固定用法)。

3. 现在完成时(持续与经历)
has been racing;has been attracting;have been using;have been enjoying。强调从过去持续到现在。

4. 定语从句(that / which)
the railway that many foreign experts claimed ...;the care that the environment deserves。that 指物作主语/宾语。

5. 不定式作目的/后置定语
to overcome ... challenges;to allow the animals to move;to protect it。不定式表目的或修饰名词。

6. so ... that 结果状语从句
Cuona Lake is so close to the railway that I want to ...。so 修饰形容词 close 引出结果。

七、逻辑链

启程(第1段):乘列车驶向"不可能"的青藏铁路,歌词"巨龙翻山"在"世界屋脊"鲜活起来

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回望(第2段):建设者来自全国各地,数年攻克工程与生态双重难题

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见证一·桥(第3段):清水河大桥(最长冻土桥)+ 33条动物通道,藏羚羊悠然过路

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见证二·湿地(第4段):675座桥护湿地草原,迁14万㎡湿地保独特生态

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见证三·高寒(第5段):唐古拉站(海拔最高),制氧站与轮休应对缺氧辐射

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见证四·湖(第6段):措那湖畔沙袋护墙,水鸟牛羊生机盎然

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升华(第7段):"天路"既震撼世界,又以环保之心善待自然,堪称 extraordinary

这是一篇第一人称游记/纪实散文,以"列车行进"为时间线索、以"景点"为空间节点:第1—2段总起,点明铁路之难与建设者身份;第3—6段依次描写清水河大桥、湿地桥梁、唐古拉站、措那湖四处景观,每处都落脚于"工程奇迹+生态保护";第7段收束,抒发民族自豪并点题"天路",情景交融、形散神聚。

八、写作迁移

模板 1:Sitting back in my seat, I can’t quite believe that I’m about to ...
课文:Sitting back in my seat, I can’t quite believe that I’m about to travel along the railway ...
仿写:Sitting back in my seat, I can’t quite believe that I’m about to land in a foreign land.(靠坐在座位上,我简直不敢相信自己即将降落异国他乡。)——用于写"身临其境、难以置信"的开篇。

模板 2:... is a record of all of our efforts to ...
课文:the Qinghai-Tibet Railway is a record of all of our efforts to overcome the most difficult engineering challenges.
仿写:The monument is a record of all of our efforts to remember the heroes.(这座纪念碑凝聚着我们缅怀英雄的全部心意。)——用于写某事物承载集体心血。

模板 3:The first ... to catch my eye is ...
课文:The first landmark to catch my eye is the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge.
仿写:The first sight to catch my eye is the golden rooftop of the temple.(最先映入眼帘的是寺庙金色的屋顶。)——用于游记中按视觉顺序引出景物。

模板 4:... have been built ... to allow ... to ...
课文:Thirty-three passages have been built ... to allow the animals to move safely and freely.
仿写:Several shelters have been built in the park to allow birds to nest safely.(公园里建了几处庇护所,让鸟儿能安全筑巢。)——用于写"为……而建、使其能……"的环保举措。

模板 5:... is so ... that I want to ...
课文:Cuona Lake is so close to the railway that I want to reach out and touch its surface.
仿写:The stars are so bright tonight that I want to step outside and count them.(今夜星光如此璀璨,我真想走出去数一数。)——用于写景物近在咫尺、引人亲近(so ... that 结果从句)。

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