一、课文原文及逐段翻译
Unit Ten Lesson 3 Anne of Green Gables/绿山墙的安妮
第1段原文:Marilla saw Matthew in the front yard and immediately rushed to the door. But when her eyes fell on the odd little figure in the stiff, ugly dress, with the long red hair and the eager, bright eyes, she froze in amazement.
译文:玛丽拉看见马修到前院了,立刻冲到门口。但当她的目光落在那个衣服不合身又难看、长着红色长头发、眼睛热切而明亮的古怪小人身上时,她惊呆了。
第2段原文:“Matthew Cuthbert, who’s that?” she asked. “Where is the boy?”
译文:“马修·卡斯伯特,她是谁?那个男孩子呢?”她问道。
第3段原文:“There wasn’t any boy,” said Matthew. “There was only her.”
译文:“没有男孩子,只有她在那里。”马修答道。
第4段原文:He nodded at the child, remembering that he had never even asked her name.
译文:他向那孩子点了点头,突然想起自己甚至还没有问过女孩儿的名字。
第5段原文:“No boy! But there must have been a boy,” insisted Marilla. “We sent word to Mrs Spencer to bring a boy.”
译文:“没有男孩儿!可是一定得有个男孩儿,”玛丽拉坚持说。“我们给斯宾塞太太捎口信要带个男孩子来的呀。”
第6段原文:“Well, she didn’t. She brought her. She arrived at train station and couldn’t be left there alone.”
译文:“好吧,她没有。斯宾塞太太只带来了这个孩子。她到了火车站,总不能把她一个人扔在那儿吧。”
第7段原文:During this dialogue the child had remained silent. Suddenly she seemed to grasp the full meaning of what had been said. She sprang forward a step and clasped her hands.
译文:俩人说话时,这孩子一声不吭。突然,她似乎完全明白了他们说话的意思,冲上前一步,双手紧握。
第8段原文:“You don’t want me!” the girl cried. “You don’t want me because I’m not a boy! I might have expected it. I might have known it was all too beautiful to last. I might have known nobody really did want me. Oh, what am I going to do? I’m going to burst into tears!”
译文:“你们不想要我!”她大喊道。“你们不想要我,就因为我不是男孩儿!我早就应该料到。我早就应该知道这件事太美好,无法持久。我早就应该想到没人真的想要我。哦,我该怎么办呀?我马上就要哭出来了!”
第9段原文:Burst into tears she did. Sitting down on a chair by the table, throwing her arms on it, and burying her face in them, she proceeded to cry stormily. Marilla and Matthew looked at each other. Neither of them knew what to say or do. Finally Marilla stepped in to try to comfort the child.
译文:她立刻哭了起来。一下坐到桌边的椅子上,扑到桌上,脸埋在臂弯里,放声大哭。玛丽拉和马修面面相觑,都不知道该说什么,也不知道该做点儿什么。最后玛丽拉试着走上前安慰这个孩子。
第10段原文:“Well, well, there’s no need to cry so about it.”
译文:“好啦,好啦,没必要为这事儿哭成这样。”
第11段原文:“Yes, there is need!” The child raised her head, revealing a tear-stained face. “You would cry, too, if you were an orphan and had come to a place you thought was going to be home and found that they didn’t want you because you weren’t a boy.
译文:“有,有必要!”那孩子抬起头,露出一张泪痕斑斑的脸。“如果你是个孤儿,来到一个满以为会成为自己家的地方,却发现他们并不想要你,因为你不是个男孩,你也会哭的。”
第12段原文:“Well, don’t cry anymore. We’re not going to send you off tonight. You’ll have to stay here until we investigate this affair. What’s your name?”
译文:“好吧,别再哭了。今晚我们不会送你走的。在我们搞清楚这件事之前,你先待在这儿。你叫什么名字?”
第13段原文:“Anne,” said the child sadly.
译文:“我叫安妮,”孩子悲伤地说。
第14段原文:“Well, come along, Anne. It’s dinner time.”
译文:“好的,来吧,安妮,该吃晚饭了。”
第15段原文:They all sat down for dinner but Anne could not eat. She tried to enjoy the bread and butter and the apple jam out of the little glass dish by her plate but she had no appetite.
译文:他们都坐下来吃饭,但安妮吃不下。她试着吃点儿面包、黄油和摆在她盘子旁边小玻璃碟里的苹果酱,但一点胃口都没有。
第16段原文:“You’re not eating anything,” said Marilla sharply, eying her as if it were a serious problem. Anne sighed.
译文:“你什么都没吃,”玛丽拉严厉地说,眼睛盯着她,好像这是个严重的问题。安妮叹了口气。
第17段原文:“I can’t. I’m in the depths of despair. Can you eat when you are in the depths of despair?”
译文:“我吃不下。我彻底绝望了。你彻底绝望的时侯还能吃得下东西吗?”
第18段原文:“I’ve never been in the depths of despair, so I can’t say,” responded Marilla.
译文:“我从来没有完全绝望的时候,所以没法回答,”玛丽拉回答道。
第19段原文:“Weren’t you? Well, did you ever try to imagine you were in the depths of despair?”
译文:“你没有过吗?好吧,那你有没有试着想象自己陷入了绝望的深渊?”
第20段原文:“No, I didn’t.”
译文:“不,没想过。”
第21段原文:“I guess she’s tired,” said Matthew. “Best put her to bed, Marilla.”
译文:“我想她一定是累了,”马修说。“最好让她去睡觉吧,玛丽拉。”
第22段原文:Marilla had been wondering where Anne should be put to bed. She decided on the small bedroom on the first floor. She lit a candle and told Anne to follow her, which Anne did, taking her hat and bag from the hall table as she passed. The hall was perfectly clean; the little room in which she found herself seemed still cleaner.
译文:玛丽拉一直在想应该让安妮睡在哪里,最后决定安排在一楼的小卧室。她点了根蜡烛,叫安妮跟着她。安妮跟了上来,路过大厅时从桌子上拿起自己的帽子和包。大厅非常干净,她发现自己进来的这间小屋似乎更干净。
第23段原文:Marilla set the candle on a three-legged table and turned down the bedclothes.
译文:玛丽拉把蜡烛放在一张三腿桌上,铺开床褥。
第24段原文:“Well, undress as quick as you can and go to bed. I’ll come back in a few minutes for the candle. I daren’t trust you to put it out yourself. You’d likely set the place on fire.”
译文:“好了,赶快脱掉衣服上床睡觉吧。几分钟后我会回来拿蜡烛,我可不放心让你自己吹灭蜡烛,你很可能会放火烧了这个地方。”
第25段原文:When Marilla had gone, Anne looked around her sadly. The whitewashed walls were so painfully bare. The floor was bare, too. In one corner was the bed, a high, old-fashioned one of dark wood. Midway between table and bed was the window, with an icy white curtain over it. There was no restroom, but there was a wash stand with a faucet in the other corner. The whole room felt cold and unwelcoming, which sent a shiver through Anne’s bones. With a sob she quickly undressed, put on her nightclothes and jumped into bed where she pressed her face down into the pillow and pulled the clothes over her head.
译文:玛丽拉走后,安妮悲伤地环顾四周。四周的墙壁粉刷得雪白,什么装饰也没有。地板上也空荡荡的,角落里有一张床,一张高高的老式深色木床。桌子和床的中间有一扇窗,窗上挂着一块冰白色的窗帘。房间里没有洗手间,但另一个角落有一个带水龙头的洗漱台。整个房间让人感到寒冷而陌生,安妮浑身打了个冷战。她抽泣着,迅速脱下衣服,穿上睡衣,跳到床上,把脸埋在枕头里,拉过棉被蒙住脑袋。
第26段原文:When Marilla came up for the light, she saw the untidy way the clothing had been thrown on the floor. She carefully picked up Anne’s clothes, placed them neatly on a yellow chair, and then, taking up the candle, went over to the bed.
译文:玛丽拉回来取蜡烛时,看到安妮的衣服乱七八糟地扔在地上,便仔细地拾起衣服,整齐地放在黄色的椅子上,然后拿起蜡烛,走到床边。
第27段原文:“Good night,”she said, a little awkwardly, but not unkindly.
译文:“晚安,”她口气有些生硬,但透着一丝温情。
第28段原文:Anne’s white face and big eyes appeared over the bedclothes. “How can you call it a good night when you know it must be the very worst night I’ve ever had?” she said disapprovingly. Then she dived down into the bedclothes again.
译文:安妮从被子里露出苍白的脸蛋和大眼睛。“你明明知道这一定是我度过的最糟糕的一晚,还说什么晚安呢?”她反驳道。然后又钻进了被子里。
第29段原文:To bed went Matthew. And to bed, when she had put her dishes away, went Marilla, frowning most resolutely. And up-stairs, in the east gable, a lonely, heart-hungry, friendless child cried herself to sleep.
译文:马修上床睡觉了。玛丽拉收拾完盘子,紧紧地皱着眉头,也回到房间休息了。楼上东山墙那边的房间里,一个孤独、心灰意冷、没有朋友的孩子,哭泣着进入了梦乡。
教材录入说明:第 12 段引语末尾缺一个收尾引号,本文讲解按完整引语理解;第 4 段 She arrived at train station 规范形式为 at the train station;文中 eying、daren't 等为原书拼写,均按原貌保留。
二、重点单词
yard n. an open area beside a house 院子;课文 in the front yard 在前院。
odd adj. strange or unusual 古怪的、异样的;课文 the odd little figure 那个古怪的小人影。
figure n. the shape of a person seen from a distance 身影、人影;课文原句:her eyes fell on the odd little figure in the stiff, ugly dress.
stiff adj. hard and not bending easily 硬挺的、不合身的;课文 the stiff, ugly dress。
eager adj. very interested and excited 热切的、渴望的;课文 the eager, bright eyes 热切而明亮的眼睛。
freeze (froze) v. to stop moving suddenly because of fear or surprise 愣住、僵住;课文原句:she froze in amazement.
amazement n. great surprise 惊讶;搭配 in amazement 惊讶地。
insist v. to say firmly that something is true 坚持说、执意认为;课文原句:'No boy! But there must have been a boy,' insisted Marilla.
remain v. to stay in the same state 保持(某种状态);课文 the child had remained silent 一声不吭。
grasp v. to understand something fully 完全明白、领会;课文 she seemed to grasp the full meaning of what had been said。
spring (sprang) v. to move suddenly and quickly 猛地跳起、冲;课文原句:She sprang forward a step and clasped her hands.
clasp v. to hold something tightly 紧握、扣紧;课文 clasped her hands 双手紧握。
proceed v. to go on to do something next 接着做;课文 she proceeded to cry stormily(proceed to do)。
reveal v. to show something that was hidden 露出、显出;课文原句:The child raised her head, revealing a tear-stained face.
orphan n. a child whose parents are dead 孤儿;课文原句:if you were an orphan and had come to a place you thought was going to be home.
investigate v. to find out the facts about something 查清、调查;课文 until we investigate this affair。
appetite n. the desire to eat 食欲;课文 but she had no appetite 一点胃口都没有。
despair n. the feeling that there is no hope 绝望;课文 in the depths of despair 绝望的深渊。
shiver n. a shaking movement caused by cold or fear 冷战、颤抖;课文 which sent a shiver through Anne's bones。
awkwardly adv. in an uncomfortable, not smooth way 生硬地、局促地;课文原句:'Good night,' she said, a little awkwardly, but not unkindly.
disapprovingly adv. showing that you think something is wrong 不以为然地、责备地;课文原句:she said disapprovingly.
三、一词多义和熟词生义
figure:熟义 n. 数字、图形、身材 → 课文义 n. 远远看见的「身影、人影」。用 figure 而不用 girl,是因为此刻玛丽拉还没认出这是个孩子,视线里只有一个轮廓——选词本身就在写「误会」。
freeze:熟义 v. 结冰、冻结 → 课文义 v.(因惊讶)愣住、僵住。she froze in amazement;口语里 Freeze! 则是「别动」。
spring:熟义 n. 春天、弹簧 → 课文义 v. 猛地一跳、冲上前(spring - sprang - sprung)。She sprang forward a step;同族 spring to one's feet 一跃而起。
burst:熟义 v. 爆炸、爆裂 → 课文义 burst into tears 突然放声大哭。Burst into tears she did 把动词短语提到句首,用助动词 did 强调「她真的哭了」。
eye:熟义 n. 眼睛 → 课文义 v. 盯着看、打量。eying her as if it were a serious problem;同类还有 eye sb up and down 上下打量。
sharply:熟义 adv. 锋利地、急剧地 → 课文义 adv.(说话)严厉地、尖刻地。said Marilla sharply;也可指 prices rose sharply 骤升,看搭配判断。
depth:熟义 n. 深度 → 课文义 the depths of despair 绝望的深渊(常用复数 depths 表「最深处」)。安妮连说三次,玛丽拉却答 I've never been in the depths of despair,冷幽默正来自这个短语被字面理解。
dare:熟义 v. 敢 → 课文 I daren't trust you to put it out yourself,daren't = dare not,后接动词原形,是情态动词用法(不用 doesn't dare)。
likely:熟义 adj. 很可能的 → 课文义 adv. 很可能(口语用法)。You'd likely set the place on fire = You would probably set ...。
affair:熟义 n. 事务、事件(也指风流韵事)→ 课文义 n. 一件待弄清的事。until we investigate this affair 在这件事查清楚之前。
heart-hungry:教材里的合成词,「心里渴望关爱的」。与 lonely, friendless 并列,用三个形容词收束全篇,比直接说「她很伤心」更有分量。
四、重点词块
【目光与出场】
1. see sb in the front yard 看见某人在前院 2. rush to the door 冲到门口 3. one's eyes fell on ... 目光落在……上 4. in a stiff, ugly dress 穿着不合身又难看的裙子 5. freeze in amazement 惊呆了 6. reveal a tear-stained face 露出一张泪痕斑斑的脸
【动作写情绪】
1. remain silent 一声不吭 2. grasp the full meaning of ... 完全明白……的意思 3. spring forward a step 冲上前一步 4. clasp one's hands 双手紧握 5. burst into tears 放声大哭 6. bury one's face in one's arms 把脸埋在臂弯里 7. look at each other 面面相觑 8. raise one's head 抬起头 9. dive down into the bedclothes 又钻进被子里
【对话与转述】
1. insisted Marilla 玛丽拉坚持说 2. responded Marilla 玛丽拉回答道 3. said Marilla sharply 玛丽拉严厉地说 4. said the child sadly 孩子悲伤地说 5. eying her as if ... 眼睛盯着她,好像…… 6. she said disapprovingly 她不以为然地说
【绝望与安慰】
1. there is no need to cry so about it 没必要为这事儿哭成这样 2. in the depths of despair 彻底绝望 3. have no appetite 没有胃口 4. step in to try to comfort the child 上前安慰孩子 5. not going to send you off tonight 今晚不会送你走 6. a little awkwardly, but not unkindly 口气有些生硬,但透着一丝温情
【房间与夜】
1. whitewashed walls 粉刷得雪白的墙 2. painfully bare 空荡得刺眼 3. a three-legged table 一张三腿桌 4. turn down the bedclothes 铺开床褥 5. an icy white curtain 冰白色的窗帘 6. cold and unwelcoming 寒冷而陌生 7. press one's face down into the pillow 把脸埋进枕头 8. cry oneself to sleep 哭着入睡
五、长难句拆解
句1
【原句】But when her eyes fell on the odd little figure in the stiff, ugly dress, with the long red hair and the eager, bright eyes, she froze in amazement.
【主干】But when her eyes fell on the figure, she froze in amazement.
【分层】when 引导时间状语从句;从句主干 her eyes fell on the odd little figure;in the stiff, ugly dress 与 with the long red hair and the eager, bright eyes 两个介词短语并列作后置定语,把「衣服 / 头发 / 眼睛」三层外貌一次叠完;主句 froze 是比喻用法(不是真结冰)。
【翻译】但当她的目光落在那个穿着不合身又难看的裙子、拖着红色长发、眼睛热切而明亮的古怪小身影上时,她惊呆了。
【考点】时间状语从句 + 多重介词短语作定语。人物出场最经典的写法:先动作(rushed),再视线(eyes fell on),最后用两个 with/in 短语堆出形象,主句只留一个短动词收住。
句2
【原句】You would cry, too, if you were an orphan and had come to a place you thought was going to be home and found that they didn't want you because you weren't a boy.
【主干】You would cry, too, if you were an orphan and had come to a place and found that they didn't want you.
【分层】if 引导虚拟条件句(与现在事实相反用 were,与过去经历相反用 had come,主句 would cry,属混合虚拟);a place 后是省略关系代词的定语从句 (that) you thought was going to be home,其中 you thought 为插入语;found 后接 that 宾语从句;because 引导原因状语从句。
【翻译】如果你是个孤儿,来到一个满以为会成为自己家的地方,却发现他们因为你不个男孩就不想要你,你也会哭的。
【考点】混合虚拟语气 + 插入语 + 宾语从句 + 原因从句。这是全篇情感最高点:安妮不用「我很难过」,而用「换成你也会哭」把读者拉进她的处境。
句3
【原句】Burst into tears she did. Sitting down on a chair by the table, throwing her arms on it, and burying her face in them, she proceeded to cry stormily.
【主干】She did burst into tears. She proceeded to cry stormily.
【分层】Burst into tears she did 是「动词短语提前 + 助动词 did」的强调式倒装,等于 She did burst into tears;后面 Sitting down ..., throwing ..., and burying ... 是三个并列的现在分词短语作伴随状语,共用主语 she;proceed to do 表示「接着、随即做」。
【翻译】她立刻哭了起来。一下坐到桌边的椅子上,扑到桌上,把脸埋进臂弯里,放声大哭。
【考点】倒装强调 + 三连分词状语。上一句刚说 'I'm going to burst into tears',下一句用倒装把这句话「兑现」,是极有节奏的呼应;三个分词按动作先后排列,一气呵成。
六、语法点清单(从句与非谓语)
一、名词性从句
1. 宾语从句:remembering that he had never even asked her name;grasp the full meaning of what had been said(what 引导);found that they didn't want you;I guess she's tired(省 that)。
2. 引语中的宾语从句:'I've never been in the depths of despair, so I can't say,' responded Marilla;'Well, don't cry anymore. We're not going to send you off tonight.'
二、定语从句
1. 省略关系代词:a place (that) you thought was going to be home(you thought 为插入语);the little glass dish (that) ...。
2. 介词 + which:the little room in which she found herself seemed still cleaner。
3. 关系副词:jumped into bed where she pressed her face down into the pillow。
4. 非限制性:The whole room felt cold and unwelcoming, which sent a shiver through Anne's bones(which 指代前面整句)。
三、虚拟语气与推测
1. 虚拟条件:if you were an orphan and had come ... you would cry(混合虚拟)。
2. as if 虚拟:eying her as if it were a serious problem;she froze in amazement(比喻)。
3. 对过去的推测与遗憾:But there must have been a boy(肯定推测);I might have expected it / I might have known it was all too beautiful to last(本该想到,含懊悔)。
4. 情态:I daren't trust you to put it out yourself;You'd likely set the place on fire(would 表推测)。
四、非谓语与倒装
1. 现在分词作状语 / 定语:remembering that ... / revealing a tear-stained face / eying her as if ... / Sitting down ..., throwing ..., and burying ... / frowning most resolutely / taking her hat and bag ...。
2. 过去分词与复合形容词:a tear-stained face / whitewashed walls / old-fashioned / heart-hungry。
3. 倒装:Burst into tears she did(强调式);To bed went Matthew. And to bed ... went Marilla(地点状语提前的全部倒装)。
4. 不定式作宾补:told Anne to follow her;trust you to put it out;Best put her to bed(口语中省略 had better)。
七、逻辑链
① 期待落空:玛丽拉冲到门口等的是「那个男孩子」,目光却落在一个衣服不合身、红头发、眼神热切的古怪小身影上——一个 froze 就把全篇冲突钉住。
② 三句对话揭谜:「那个男孩子呢?」→「没有男孩子,只有她在那里。」→「一定得有个男孩儿,我们捎口信要的是男孩。」信息全靠对白交代,叙述几乎不插话。
③ 沉默积蓄:在这段对话里孩子一直不出声;直到 grasp the full meaning,才 sprang forward、clasped her hands——先动作、后语言,把爆发前的压抑写足。
④ 情绪决堤:「你们不想要我,就因为我不是男孩儿!」连用三个 I might have known 把「早该料到」的绝望推到顶点;紧接着 Burst into tears she did 用倒装把哭声砸下来。
⑤ 笨拙的安抚:玛丽拉从「没必要哭成这样」退到「今晚不送你走」「在我们查清楚之前你先待着」,再问名字、叫吃饭;一句 not unkindly 点出她生硬之下的松动。
⑥ 餐桌上的反差:安妮说「我彻底绝望了」,玛丽拉答「我从来没有完全绝望的时候,所以没法回答」——同一短语被字面理解,悲剧里透出冷幽默;马修一句「她一定是累了」替全场收束。
⑦ 以房间收尾:雪白的墙、空荡的地板、冰白窗帘、带水龙头的洗漱台,房间 cold and unwelcoming;倒装句把两个大人一个个送去睡觉,镜头最后停在上房东山墙里那个「哭着入睡」的孩子。
写法提炼:小说节选靠「期待 → 落空 → 沉默 → 爆发 → 笨拙安抚 → 夜的孤独」六拍推进:对话负责信息,短动词(froze / sprang / burst / dived)负责情绪,环境负责结局。可迁移的是:用 figure 而非 girl 制造视角误会,用倒装和并列分词调节奏,全程不写「她很伤心」,最后用一个房间替人物说话。
八、写作迁移(仿写与输出)
仿写模板:X saw ... and immediately rushed to the door. But when her eyes fell on ..., in ..., with ..., she froze in amazement. During this dialogue the child had remained silent. Suddenly she seemed to grasp the full meaning of what had been said. '...' the girl cried. ... did she. Sitting down ..., throwing ..., and burying ..., she proceeded to .... When ... had gone, ... looked around ... . The whole ... felt ..., which sent a shiver through ... .
示范:Mum saw the envelope on the table and immediately rushed to the door. But when her eyes fell on the thin white letter, with a red stamp and my name in small print, she froze in amazement. During the whole walk home I had remained silent. Suddenly she seemed to grasp the full meaning of what had been written. 'You are not going,' she said. Go I did not. Sitting down by the window, folding the letter twice, and pressing it into her pocket, she proceeded to smile quietly. When I had gone upstairs, the kitchen felt strangely still, which sent a shiver through the quiet house.
可迁移句式:① one's eyes fell on ..., she froze(出场)② if you were ..., you would ...(虚拟)③ I might have known ...(本该想到)④ Burst into tears she did / To bed went ...(倒装)⑤ 三个并列现在分词作伴随状语 ⑥ find / feel + 宾语 + 形容词 ⑦ which 指代整句的非限制性定语从句。
输出任务:以「门开以后」为题写 150 词片段。要求:先写一句期待,再用 eyes fell on + 两个介词短语制造落空;用一句虚拟语气写出人物心里的话;用三个并列现在分词写一串动作;最后用一个含 which 非限制性定语从句的环境句收尾。全段不出现「伤心 / 难过 / 失望」等直白情绪词。
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