北师大版高中英语选择性必修二 Unit6 Lesson1 From Page to Screen(从纸书到屏幕) 原文译文重点单词短语长难句文章结构拆解等知识点解读

一、课文原文及逐段翻译

Lesson 1 From Page to Screen 第一课 从纸书到屏幕

第1段原文:Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences, but it’s normal to have high expectations when a film of a favourite book is made. There are many times I have been pessimistic or even disappointed by a film of a book I love. Although highly regarded books do not always make good films, it is safe to say that great films may be made from not particularly good books. (The Godfather immediately springs to mind.)

译文:读书和看电影是两种截然不同的体验。如果人们最喜欢的书籍被翻拍成电影,他们对电影的期待值自然更高,这种现象很正常。不止一次,我喜欢的书籍拍成电影,我都不看好,甚至很失望。尽管高质量的书并不总是能拍出好看的电影,优秀的电影也可能来自不是那么好的书,说的倒是没错。(这让我马上想到《教父》。)

第2段原文:The source material for a film may be taken from classic novels, short stories, comic books and stage plays, as well as non-fiction such as biographies and autobiographies, even those written by ghost writers. All can work well, but why do many adaptations and indeed remakes fail with both cinema audiences and critics? And why do some adaptations get lower ratings than others?

译文:一部电影可以取材自经典小说、短篇小说、漫画书、舞台剧,也可以取自传记、自传等非小说作品,甚至是代笔人写的作品。这些素材都可以拍出很棒的作品,但为什么许多改编、翻拍的电影没能受到电影观众与评论家的好评呢?为什么有些改编作品的评分比其他作品低呢?

第3段原文:A key question is obviously how close to the original the film is. Since a typical film is only around two hours long, it becomes a question for screenwriters to decide what is appropriate for the screen and what to leave out. Screenwriters take creative liberty and sometimes there may be changes to the plot, additions, and even different endings to please producers, directors and test audiences. I, like many people, have often left the cinema feeling “the film is not like the book”.

译文:显而易见,一个关键的问题在于这部电影与原作接近程度如何。电影通常只有两小时左右,在有限的时间里,编剧要决定书中哪部分适合银幕,哪部分不适合。对此编剧有一定的创作自由度,有时为了迎合制片人、导演、观众,会改动部分情节,甚至演绎不同结局。和很多人一样,我也经常在看完电影后感叹“这部电影和原作不一样”。

第4段原文:Another problem area is the cast. Finding actors acceptable to film audiences can mean the difference between success and failure. Readers of the book use their imaginations to visualise characters and have very definite ideas about how characters should look and sound. This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.

译文:另一个问题是演员阵容。找到电影观众所接受的演员,有时决定着电影的成败。读者会通过自己的想象,将书中的人物形象化,角色的外貌、声音他们都有明确的想法。我认为选择的演员不符合他们的想象,成为很多电影改编失败的原因。

第5段原文:Some books are just too difficult to be adapted for technical reasons, although films like The Life of Pi are changing this idea. CGI (Computer Generated Image) technology has had a huge impact on the film industry. It allowed the previously unfilmable to become a reality.

译文:一些书由于技术原因很难拍成电影,虽然《少年派的奇幻漂流》等电影的出现正在改变这一问题。电脑生成动画技术对电影产业有重大影响,让以前无法拍摄的内容成为现实。

第6段原文:One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best position to do film adaptations. In fact, sometimes authors are very involved in the process and may even be the screenwriter. This can actually be a disadvantage because they may be too close to the material and find it difficult to adapt to a new form. At other times they are not, and there are instances where writers have been very unsatisfied with the film versions of their work; Stephen King is an example of this. Even more extreme was novelist J. D. Salinger, who made sure no film versions of his popular novel A Catcher in the Rye could ever be made. In this situation, it is clear that viewers will not be disappointed! For me, anyway, it is always a bad idea to watch a film of a book you love.

译文:人们可能会认为,最适合改编电影的人应该是书籍作者本人。事实上,作者有时的确会参与改编,甚至可能担任电影编剧。但这其实有局限性,因为作者本人可能过于忠于书中内容,很难将其改编成一种新的形式。有时作者本人并不是电影编剧,于是出现了作者对自己作品所拍摄的电影版本非常不满意的情况。史蒂芬•金就是这样。小说家杰罗姆•大卫•塞林格更为极端,他永远不准自己广受欢迎的小说《麦田里的守望者》被拍成电影版本。如果是这样,读者就永远不会失望!不管怎样,我认为去看自己钟爱的书籍翻拍成的电影不会是个好主意。

第7段原文:Despite the challenges, there have been some highly successful films made from popular books. For me, Jaws, Harry Potter and The Lord of the Rings all fit this category. And possibly the best proof of a successful adaptation is the James Bond series, the majority of which has been adapted from the 007 novels of Ian Fleming. Perhaps unusually, audiences seem to accept that the actors who have played James Bond have changed so often, although everyone seems to have their favourite. I know I do.

译文:尽管挑战重重,还是有一些改编自畅销书的电影取得了极大成功,例如《大白鲨》《哈利波特》和《指环王》都是成功的案例。可能最好的例子是詹姆斯•邦德系列,该系列的大部分作品都改编自伊恩•弗莱明的《007》系列小说。系列影片中詹姆斯•邦德的扮演者经常换人,但观众们似乎也能接受,这让人难以相信。但我相信每位观众和我一样,都有自己最喜欢的那个扮演者。


二、重点单词

expectation 名词

英文释义 a belief that something will happen or that someone / something will be good

课文原句 “...it’s normal to have high expectations when a film of a favourite book is made.”

点拨:have high expectations 常用复数,与 live up to expectations(不负所望)一起记。

pessimistic 形容词

英文释义 expecting bad things to happen

课文原句 “There are many times I have been pessimistic or even disappointed...”

highly regarded 形容词短语

英文释义 thought to be very good by many people

课文原句 “Although highly regarded books do not always make good films...”

spring to mind 短语

英文释义 to suddenly come into your thoughts

课文原句 “(The Godfather immediately springs to mind.)”

source material 名词短语

英文释义 the original text or story that a film, play etc. is based on

课文原句 “The source material for a film may be taken from classic novels...”

non-fiction 名词

英文释义 writing that is about real facts and events, not invented stories

课文原句 “...as well as non-fiction such as biographies and autobiographies...”

biography / autobiography 名词

英文释义 the story of a person’s life written by someone else / by that person

课文原句 “...such as biographies and autobiographies...”

ghost writer 名词

英文释义 someone who writes a book for another person whose name appears on it

课文原句 “...even those written by ghost writers.”

adaptation 名词

英文释义 a film, book or play based on another work

课文原句 “...why do many adaptations and indeed remakes fail...?”

点拨:动词 adapt,名词 adaptation,形容词 adaptable,一组三词要一起记。

remake 名词

英文释义 a new version of an old film

课文原句 “...adaptations and indeed remakes fail with both cinema audiences and critics?”

critic 名词

英文释义 someone whose job is to give opinions about films, books, art etc.

课文原句 “...fail with both cinema audiences and critics?”

rating 名词

英文释义 a score or judgement showing how good something is

课文原句 “...why do some adaptations get lower ratings than others?”

original 名词 / 形容词

英文释义 the work from which a copy or adaptation is made; existing from the beginning

课文原句 “A key question is obviously how close to the original the film is.”

点拨:此处作名词“原作”,不是形容词“原来的”。

screenwriter 名词

英文释义 someone who writes the script for a film

课文原句 “...it becomes a question for screenwriters to decide...”

creative liberty 名词短语

英文释义 freedom to change details when creating an adaptation

课文原句 “Screenwriters take creative liberty...”

plot 名词

英文释义 the main events of a story

课文原句 “...there may be changes to the plot, additions, and even different endings...”

cast 名词

英文释义 all the actors in a film or play

课文原句 “Another problem area is the cast.”

点拨:常见义是动词“投、掷”,此处是名词“全体演员”。

visualise 动词

英文释义 to form a picture of something in your mind

课文原句 “Readers of the book use their imaginations to visualise characters...”

definite 形容词

英文释义 clear and certain; not likely to change

课文原句 “...have very definite ideas about how characters should look and sound.”

CGI 缩写名词

英文释义 Computer Generated Image, images created by computer for films

课文原句 “CGI technology has had a huge impact on the film industry.”

impact 名词

英文释义 a strong effect or influence

课文原句 “...has had a huge impact on the film industry.”

点拨:have an impact on sb/sth 固定搭配。

unfilmable 形容词

英文释义 impossible to make into a film

课文原句 “It allowed the previously unfilmable to become a reality.”

点拨:the + 形容词表示一类事物,the unfilmable = 无法拍摄的内容。

involved 形容词

英文释义 taking part in something

课文原句 “...authors are very involved in the process...”

disadvantage 名词

英文释义 something that makes a situation less likely to succeed

课文原句 “This can actually be a disadvantage because...”

instance 名词

英文释义 a particular example of something happening

课文原句 “...and there are instances where writers have been very unsatisfied...”

extreme 形容词

英文释义 much more serious or unusual than usual

课文原句 “Even more extreme was novelist J. D. Salinger...”

category 名词

英文释义 a group of things that are similar in some way

课文原句 “...Jaws, Harry Potter and The Lord of the Rings all fit this category.”

proof 名词

英文释义 facts or examples showing that something is true

课文原句 “...possibly the best proof of a successful adaptation is the James Bond series...”

majority 名词

英文释义 the greater part or most of something

课文原句 “...the majority of which has been adapted from the 007 novels...”


三、一词多义和熟词生义

regard 常见义是动词“看待、把……看作”,highly regarded 是过去分词形容词“备受好评的”。原句 “highly regarded books”。

spring 常见义是名词“春天、泉水”或动词“跳跃”,spring to mind 是“(念头)突然冒出来”。原句 “The Godfather immediately springs to mind”。

original 常见义是形容词“最初的、原创的”,课文中作名词指“原著、原作”。原句 “how close to the original the film is”。

leave out 常见义是“遗漏、忘记”,课文中是改编术语“删去(原著内容)”。原句 “what to leave out”。

liberty 常见义是“自由、自由权”,take creative liberty 是“发挥创作自由(即改动原作)”。

cast 常见义是动词“投掷、投射(光)”,课文中是名词“演员阵容”。原句 “Another problem area is the cast”。

fall down 常见义是“摔倒、跌倒”,课文中是“失败、出问题”。原句 “This is where I think many film adaptations fall down”。

close 常见义是“关闭、近的(距离)”,how close to the original 指“与原作的贴合程度(内容相似度)”。

position 常见义是“位置、职位”,be in the best position to do sth 是“最具备条件做某事”。

please 常见义是“使高兴、取悦”,课文中 to please producers, directors and test audiences 带一点“迎合”的意味。

form 常见义是“表格、形式”,adapt to a new form 指“改编成一种新的艺术形式(电影)”。

fit 常见义是“合身、适合”,fit this category 是“属于这一类别”。


四、重点词块

动词 + 名词 / 介词搭配

have high expectations(期待很高)

make good films(拍出好电影)

spring to mind(一下子想到)

be taken from...(取材于……)

fail with audiences and critics(观众与评论家都不买账)

get lower ratings(评分更低)

decide what to leave out(决定删去什么)

take creative liberty(自由发挥、改动原作)

make changes to the plot(改动情节)

please producers and directors(迎合制片人与导演)

leave the cinema feeling...(带着……的感受离开影院)

use one’s imagination to visualise...(凭想象勾勒……)

have very definite ideas about...(对……有很明确的想法)

fall down(栽跟头、失败)

have a huge impact on...(对……影响巨大)

be in the best position to do sth(最适合做某事)

be involved in the process(参与其中)

adapt to a new form(改编成新形式)

be unsatisfied with...(对……不满意)

make sure (that)...(确保……)

fit this category(属于这一类)

be adapted from...(改编自……)。

固定搭配 / 句式

it’s normal to do sth(做某事很正常)

it is safe to say that...(可以肯定地说……)

as well as(以及)

too + adj + to be done(太……以至于不能被……)

the + adj(the previously unfilmable:一类事物)

find it difficult to do sth(发现做某事很难)

there are instances where...(有一些……的例子)

Despite the challenges(尽管困难重重)

the majority of which(其中大部分)

it is always a bad idea to do sth(做某事总不是好主意)。

语篇衔接(议论文提问链)

Although...(让步)

but why do...? And why do...?(连问引出分论点)

A key question is obviously...(第一个原因)

Another problem area is...(第二个原因)

Some books are just too difficult...(第三个原因)

One may think that... In fact,...(先立后破)

Even more extreme was...(递进举例 + 倒装)

Despite the challenges,...(转折收束)

Perhaps unusually,...(评注)。


五、长难句拆解

【原句】Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences, but it’s normal to have high expectations when a film of a favourite book is made.

【主干】Reading... and watching... are two very different experiences.

【分层】两个动名词并列作主语,谓语用复数 are;but 后 it 是形式主语,真正主语是不定式 to have high expectations;when 引导时间状从,从句用被动 is made。

【翻译】读书与看电影是两种很不一样的体验;但当心爱之书被拍成电影时,期待很高也属正常。

【考点】并列动名词作主语 + 复数谓语;it 形式主语 + to do;when 状从里的被动语态。

【原句】Although highly regarded books do not always make good films, it is safe to say that great films may be made from not particularly good books.

【主干】it is safe to say that...

【分层】Although 让步状从;主句 it 形式主语 + to say + that 宾从;宾从用被动 may be made from;not particularly good 是委婉否定。

【翻译】尽管好评如潮的书未必能拍成好电影,但可以肯定地说,好电影也可能出自不那么出色的书。

【考点】部分否定 not always;it is + adj + to say that...;被动语态;委婉表达 not particularly。

【原句】The source material for a film may be taken from classic novels, short stories, comic books and stage plays, as well as non-fiction such as biographies and autobiographies, even those written by ghost writers.

【主干】The source material may be taken from...

【分层】四个并列名词作 from 的宾语;as well as 追加一类;such as 举例;those 指代 non-fiction 作品,written by ghost writers 过去分词作后置定语。

【翻译】电影素材可以取自经典小说、短篇、漫画、舞台剧,也可以取自传记、自传这类非虚构作品,甚至是代笔写成的作品。

【考点】被动 + 长并列宾语;as well as / such as 层次;过去分词作定语。

【原句】A key question is obviously how close to the original the film is.

【主干】A key question is how... the film is.

【分层】how 引导表语从句;close to the original 是形容词短语,被 how 提到从句句首,因此从句用“how + 表语 + 主语 + 系动词”的语序(不能写成 how the film is close to...)。

【翻译】一个关键问题显然在于:电影与原作到底有多贴合。

【考点】表语从句里表语提前的语序,是本篇最容易被忽略的语法点。

【原句】Since a typical film is only around two hours long, it becomes a question for screenwriters to decide what is appropriate for the screen and what to leave out.

【主干】it becomes a question for screenwriters to decide...

【分层】Since 原因状从;it 形式主语,真正主语是 for screenwriters to decide...(带逻辑主语的不定式复合结构);decide 后接 what 从句与 what to do 两个并列宾语,结构不对称但语义并列。

【翻译】由于一部电影通常只有两小时左右,编剧就得决定哪些内容适合上银幕、哪些该删掉。

【考点】for sb to do 复合结构;疑问词从句与“疑问词 + 不定式”并列作宾语。

【原句】I, like many people, have often left the cinema feeling “the film is not like the book”.

【主干】I have often left the cinema.

【分层】like many people 介词短语作插入语;feeling... 现在分词作伴随状语,说明离场时的感受。

【翻译】和许多人一样,我也常常带着“这电影和书不一样”的念头走出影院。

【考点】插入语;现在分词作伴随状语(对比 Story C 的 indicating that...)。

【原句】Finding actors acceptable to film audiences can mean the difference between success and failure. Readers of the book use their imaginations to visualise characters and have very definite ideas about how characters should look and sound. This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.

【主干】Finding actors... can mean the difference. / Readers use... and have... / This is where...

【分层】动名词短语作主语;acceptable to film audiences 形容词短语作后置定语修饰 actors;how 引导宾语从句作 about 的宾语;where 引导表语从句,I think 是插入语。

【翻译】找到观众认可的演员,可能就决定了成败。读者会凭想象把人物具体化,对角色该长什么样、声音如何都有很明确的想法。我认为,很多改编电影恰恰栽在这里。

【考点】动名词作主语 + 单数谓语;形容词短语后置;where 引导表语从句;插入语识别。

【原句】Some books are just too difficult to be adapted for technical reasons, although films like The Life of Pi are changing this idea. CGI technology has had a huge impact on the film industry. It allowed the previously unfilmable to become a reality.

【主干】Some books are too difficult to be adapted. / CGI technology has had a huge impact. / It allowed the unfilmable to become a reality.

【分层】too + adj + to be done(被动不定式);although 让步状从;the + 形容词 unfilmable 名词化,作 allowed 的宾语;to become a reality 不定式作宾语补足语。

【翻译】有些书因技术原因太难改编,不过《少年派的奇幻漂流》这类影片正在改变这一看法。电脑成像技术给电影业带来巨大影响,让从前拍不出来的东西成了现实。

【考点】too...to... 的被动式;the + adj 表一类;allow sb/sth to do。

【原句】One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best position to do film adaptations.

【主干】One may think that...

【分层】that 宾从里套强调句 it is... who...,强调主语 the book writer;be in the best position to do 固定搭配。

【翻译】人们或许会以为,最适合改编电影的正是原书作者本人。

【考点】强调句 + 宾语从句嵌套;强调人时可用 who / that。

【原句】This can actually be a disadvantage because they may be too close to the material and find it difficult to adapt to a new form.

【主干】This can be a disadvantage.

【分层】because 原因状从;too close to 与 find it difficult to do 并列;find + it(形式宾语)+ adj + to do 是必考结构。

【翻译】这反倒可能成为劣势:他们离原素材太近,会觉得很难把它改换成一种新的形式。

【考点】find it + adj + to do;too... to 的语义(此处 be too close to 是“过于贴近”而非“太……不能”)。

【原句】Even more extreme was novelist J. D. Salinger, who made sure no film versions of his popular novel A Catcher in the Rye could ever be made.

【主干】Even more extreme was novelist J. D. Salinger.(倒装:表语 + 系动词 + 主语)

【分层】为避免主语过长,把表语提前形成完全倒装;who 引导非限制性定从;made sure 后接省略 that 的宾从,从句用被动 could ever be made。

【翻译】更极端的是小说家塞林格,他确保自己广受欢迎的小说《麦田里的守望者》永远不会被拍成电影。

【考点】表语前置引起的完全倒装;make sure (that)...;情态动词被动语态。

【原句】Despite the challenges, there have been some highly successful films made from popular books. And possibly the best proof of a successful adaptation is the James Bond series, the majority of which has been adapted from the 007 novels of Ian Fleming.

【主干】there have been some highly successful films. / the best proof is the James Bond series.

【分层】Despite 介词短语作让步状语;made from popular books 过去分词作后置定语修饰 films;the majority of which 是“数量词 + of + 关系代词”引导的非限制性定从,which 指 the James Bond series。

【翻译】尽管困难重重,改编自畅销书的成功影片仍不少。而成功改编的最佳例证,或许就是詹姆斯·邦德系列,其中大部分改编自伊恩·弗莱明的 007 小说。

【考点】there be 完成时;过去分词作后置定语;the majority of which 非限制性定从(与 Unit 4 Lesson 3 的 of which he has many 同族)。


六、语法点清单(形式主语、名词性从句与倒装)

形式主语 it:it’s normal to have...;it is safe to say that...;it becomes a question for sb to decide...;it is clear that viewers will not be disappointed;it is always a bad idea to watch...。全文出现五次,是本篇最突出的句式特征。

表语从句:A key question is how close to the original the film is(表语提前);This is where I think many film adaptations fall down(含插入语)。

宾语从句:have definite ideas about how characters should look and sound;One may think that...;audiences seem to accept that...;made sure (that)...。

定语从句:There are many times I have been pessimistic(省略关系副词);a film of a book I love;instances where writers have been...;who made sure...;the majority of which has been adapted...;the actors who have played James Bond...。

状语从句:when a film... is made(时间);Although...(让步,三次);Since...(原因);because...(原因);although everyone seems to...(让步)。

被动语态:may be taken from...;may be made from...;to be adapted;could ever be made;has been adapted;is made。

非谓语:Reading / watching(动名词作主语);Finding actors...(动名词作主语);feeling...(现在分词作伴随);made from / written by(过去分词作后置定语);what to leave out(疑问词 + 不定式)。

强调与倒装:it is the book writer who...(强调句);Even more extreme was novelist...(表语前置完全倒装)。

比较结构:get lower ratings than others;the difference between success and failure;more extreme;the majority of which。

归拢后可以看出:it 形式主语群 + 名词性从句与定语从句 + 被动语态和倒装是这篇课文的三大语法主线。它是一篇标准的“提问—分因—举例—结论”议论文,长句虽多,但每段都有一句清晰的论点句,精读时先抓论点、再拆例证最省力。


七、逻辑链

提出张力(第1段):Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences 立起全篇矛盾;再用 it’s normal to have high expectations 解释失望的来源;最后用 Although... it is safe to say that... 给出反直觉判断——好书未必成好电影,好电影也可能出自平庸之书(《教父》随手作证)。第一句与最后一句构成全文的思辨框架。

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设问(第2段):先铺陈素材来源之广(小说、短篇、漫画、舞台剧、传记、自传、代笔作品),再用两个 why 连问:为什么这么多改编与翻拍既失了观众也失了评论家?为什么评分有高有低?自此进入“分因”结构。

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原因一:贴近度(第3段):A key question is obviously how close to the original the film is。Since 给出硬约束——电影只有两小时;于是编剧必须取舍,take creative liberty,改情节、加内容、换结局,且常常是 to please producers, directors and test audiences。作者用自己 leaving the cinema feeling “the film is not like the book” 收束,把抽象问题落回观众体验。

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原因二:演员阵容(第4段):Another problem area is the cast。读者早已 use their imaginations to visualise characters,对外貌声音有 very definite ideas;This is where... fall down 一句把“想象先入为主”判为改编失败的主因,与上一因(文本取舍)形成“文本 / 形象”两条线。

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原因三:技术(第5段):有些书 too difficult to be adapted for technical reasons;随即用《少年派》与 CGI 自我修正——技术正把 the previously unfilmable 变成现实。这一段是全文最漂亮的让步:先列限制,再指出限制正在消失。

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原因四:原作者(第6段):先立常见看法(One may think that it is the book writer who... 强调句),再用 In fact 反转:作者太贴近素材,反而 be a disadvantage、find it difficult to adapt to a new form。举例逐级加重——斯蒂芬·金不满意 → 塞林格干脆禁止改编(Even more extreme was... 倒装)。最后一句 it is always a bad idea to watch a film of a book you love 是带自嘲的个人结论。

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反证与收束(第7段):Despite the challenges 一转,列出《大白鲨》《哈利波特》《指环王》与 007 系列,用 the best proof 给成功改编一个落脚点;再补一句“邦德换了多少演员观众都接受”,恰好回扣原因二——可见选角并非铁律。Perhaps unusually / everyone seems to have their favourite 让结尾留有余味,不把话说死。

全文结构是“立矛盾 → 连问 → 四因分述(每因自带让步或反转)→ 反证 → 个人结论”。最值得学的是它不站队:每个原因都先说成立、再说例外,这正是英语议论文里 hedging(留有余地)的典型写法。


八、写作迁移(仿写与输出)

模板一:It is safe to say that... / It’s normal to...(稳妥表态)

课文句:Although highly regarded books do not always make good films, it is safe to say that great films may be made from not particularly good books.

仿写:Although hard work does not always pay off at once, it is safe to say that it never goes to waste.(努力未必立刻见效,但可以肯定地说,它从不会白费。)——议论文亮观点,比 I think 更有分寸。

模板二:A key question is how... / Another problem area is...(分因列举)

课文句:A key question is obviously how close to the original the film is. / Another problem area is the cast.

仿写:A key question is how much time students can actually spend on reading; another problem area is the lack of guidance.(关键在于学生究竟能挤出多少时间阅读,另一个难题是缺少指导。)——建议类、分析类作文的分论点句。

模板三:One may think that it is... who..., In fact,...(先立后破)

课文句:One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best position to do film adaptations. In fact, ... This can actually be a disadvantage.

仿写:One may think that it is the fastest runner who wins the relay; in fact, it is the smoothest baton pass that decides the race.(有人以为接力赛赢在跑得最快的人,其实决定胜负的是交接棒最顺的那一下。)——用于推翻成见,强调句 + In fact 组合很有力。

模板四:This is where... fall down(点明症结)

课文句:This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.

仿写:This is where many study plans fall down — they look perfect on paper but leave no room for a bad day.(许多学习计划正是栽在这里:纸面上完美,却没给状态不好的日子留余地。)——分析问题根源的高分句。

模板五:Despite..., there have been...(让步式反证)

课文句:Despite the challenges, there have been some highly successful films made from popular books.

仿写:Despite the tight schedule, there have been several moments when our team worked better than ever.(尽管时间很紧,仍有好几次我们团队配合得比以往更好。)——结尾转折,避免论点绝对化。

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