一、课文原文及逐段翻译
Story C 我就是格罗克
第1段原文:A middle-aged man was feeling very down. Everything had been going wrong for him. He had had problems at work and his wife had left him for another man. So, after he had been feeling depressed for over a month, he decided to go to the doctor. He had to wait for what seemed like ages in the doctor’s surgery. The bleeding man next to him was looking at his watch nervously; a woman was coughing and sneezing badly; and a baby was screaming. Finally, after he had been waiting for about half an hour, he was called in for his consultation. The doctor was writing a note at her desk when he came in. “Sorry, I’m just finishing something. I’m afraid we’ve been very busy this morning.” She then turned to the man. “So, what’s the problem?” she asked.
译文:一个中年男子觉得非常沮丧。最近他诸事不顺。他在工作上遇到了问题,妻子又跟别的男人跑了。在沮丧了一个多月后,他决定去看医生。他在诊室里等着,像是等了几个世纪。旁边的男人在流血,紧张地看着手表;一个女人使劲咳嗽、打喷嚏;还有个婴儿在哭闹。等了半小时后,终于叫到他了。他进去时医生正在办公桌上写便条。“抱歉,我刚忙完别的事,今天上午很忙。”之后她转向中年人问道,“你怎么了?”
第2段原文:“Well, I’ve been having a bit of a crisis, you know, lots of problems,” replied the man. “And I’ve been doing a lot of work.”
译文:“是这样的,我最近遭遇了一点危机,嗯,是出现了很多问题,”那人回答道,“而且我工作一直很忙。”
第3段原文:“Mmm, you’re looking very pale.” The doctor started to examine him. “Well, everything is working OK,” she announced afterwards. “You have slightly high blood pressure and you’re breathing quite heavily, but otherwise everything’s fine.”
译文:“嗯,你脸色很苍白。”医生开始给他检查。“不过一切正常,”她检查后说道。“除了血压有点高,呼吸有些沉重,其他方面都正常。”
第4段原文:“So what can I do?” asked the man. “I’m going on a trip soon. I will be working in the United States for three months. This time next week, I’ll be arriving in New York.”
译文:“那我该怎么办?”那人问道。“我很快就要出差了,要在美国连续工作三个月。下星期的这个时候,我就去纽约了。”
第5段原文:The doctor thought for a while. “I think what you need is a good laugh. That would do you a lot of good. A circus is performing in town. Why don’t you go to see it? I hear there’s an amazing clown who’ll really make you laugh. His name’s Grock.”
译文:医生想了一会儿。“我觉得你需要开怀大笑,笑出来对你很有好处。城里刚好有马戏团表演,你怎么不去看看呢?我听说马戏团里有个很棒的小丑,叫格罗克,他肯定能逗笑你。”
第6段原文:“I am Grock,” replied the man sadly.
译文:“可我就是格罗克,”那人悲伤地回答。
二、重点单词
middle-aged 形容词
英文释义 no longer young but not yet old
课文原句 “A middle-aged man was feeling very down.”
点拨:复合形容词,中间必须用连字符,年龄类写作高频。
down 形容词
英文释义 sad and depressed
课文原句 “...was feeling very down.”
depressed 形容词
英文释义 very sad and without hope
课文原句 “...after he had been feeling depressed for over a month...”
surgery 名词
英文释义 (British English) the place where a doctor sees patients; medical treatment involving cutting the body
课文原句 “He had to wait for what seemed like ages in the doctor’s surgery.”
点拨:英式英语里指“诊室、诊所”,美式更常用 office;作“外科手术”是另一义,本篇取前者。
consultation 名词
英文释义 a meeting with a doctor or expert to get advice
课文原句 “...he was called in for his consultation.”
bleeding 形容词 / 现在分词
英文释义 losing blood
课文原句 “The bleeding man next to him was looking at his watch nervously...”
sneeze 动词
英文释义 to have air come suddenly out of your nose with a loud noise
课文原句 “...a woman was coughing and sneezing badly...”
pale 形容词
英文释义 (of a person’s face) having less colour than usual, because of illness or shock
课文原句 “Mmm, you’re looking very pale.”
blood pressure 名词短语
英文释义 the pressure of blood as it moves around the body
课文原句 “You have slightly high blood pressure...”
crisis 名词
英文释义 a time of great danger, difficulty or confusion
课文原句 “I’ve been having a bit of a crisis...”
circus 名词
英文释义 a travelling show with clowns, acrobats and animals
课文原句 “A circus is performing in town.”
clown 名词
英文释义 a performer who wears funny clothes and makes people laugh
课文原句 “I hear there’s an amazing clown who’ll really make you laugh.”
amazing 形容词
英文释义 very good or surprising
课文原句 “...an amazing clown...”
note 名词
英文释义 a short informal letter or record
课文原句 “The doctor was writing a note at her desk...”
点拨:此处是“便条、记录”,不是“笔记”也不是“音符”。
examine 动词
英文释义 to look at someone carefully in order to check their health
课文原句 “The doctor started to examine him.”
三、一词多义和熟词生义
down 常见义是副词“向下”,课文中是形容词“情绪低落的”。原句 “was feeling very down”。feel down 是口语高频搭配。
surgery 常见义是“外科手术”,课文中是英式“诊室”。原句 “in the doctor’s surgery”,若译成“在手术室里等了很久”就完全错了。
note 常见义是“笔记、便条、音符”,课文中指医生写的“病历记录 / 便条”。原句 “was writing a note at her desk”。
badly 常见译作“糟糕地、坏地”,课文中是“厉害地、严重地”。原句 “a woman was coughing and sneezing badly”。
ages 常见义是名词复数“很多年、时代”,课文中是口语夸张“很长时间”。原句 “wait for what seemed like ages”。
bit 常见义是“一点、小块”,a bit of a crisis 是委婉说法,译作“有点小危机”,实际语气是轻描淡写地把大麻烦说小。
work 常见义是“工作”,课文中 everything is working OK 指“身体机能运转正常”。原句 “everything is working OK”。
otherwise 常见义是“否则”,课文中是副词“除此之外、在其他方面”。原句 “but otherwise everything’s fine”。
good 在 do you a lot of good 中是名词“好处、益处”,不是形容词。原句 “That would do you a lot of good”。
make 在 make you laugh 中是使役动词“使、让”,后接不带 to 的不定式。原句 “who’ll really make you laugh”。
四、重点词块
动词 + 名词 / 介词搭配
feel very down(心情很低落)
go wrong(出问题、不顺)
have problems at work(工作上遇到麻烦)
leave sb for another man(跟别人走了)
go to the doctor(去看医生)
wait for what seemed like ages(像是等了很久)
look at his watch(看表)
be called in for one’s consultation(被叫进去就诊)
start to examine sb(开始检查)
have slightly high blood pressure(血压略高)
breathe heavily(呼吸沉重)
go on a trip(出差)
do sb a lot of good(对某人很有好处)
go to see a circus(去看马戏)
make sb laugh(逗某人笑)。
固定表达 / 句式
a bit of a crisis(有点小危机)
What’s the problem?(怎么了)
So what can I do?(那我该怎么办)
Why don’t you do sth?(何不做某事:提建议)
I hear (that)...(我听说……)
but otherwise...(除此之外)
This time next week...(下周的这个时候)。
语篇衔接
So,...(于是:引出决定)
Finally,...(终于:结束等待)
Well,... / Mmm,...(口语停顿)
afterwards(之后)
replied the man sadly(悲伤地回答:副词点明反转情绪)。
五、长难句拆解
【原句】Everything had been going wrong for him. He had had problems at work and his wife had left him for another man.
【主干】Everything had been going wrong. / He had had problems and his wife had left him.
【分层】had been going 是过去完成进行时,强调“在那之前一直持续”;had had 是过去完成时(had + had),前一个 had 是助动词,后一个是实义动词 have 的过去分词;for him / for another man 介词短语。
【翻译】他诸事不顺。工作上出了岔子,妻子也跟别的男人走了。
【考点】过去完成时 / 过去完成进行时表示“过去的过去”;had had 这个形式最容易看错,须拆成 had + had。
【原句】So, after he had been feeling depressed for over a month, he decided to go to the doctor.
【主干】he decided to go to the doctor.
【分层】after 引导时间状语从句,从句用过去完成进行时 had been feeling;for over a month 持续时间状语;So 承接上文。
【翻译】就这样,在消沉了一个多月之后,他决定去看医生。
【考点】after + 过去完成(进行)时,与 When / before / by the time 的时态搭配属同一考点群。
【原句】He had to wait for what seemed like ages in the doctor’s surgery. The bleeding man next to him was looking at his watch nervously; a woman was coughing and sneezing badly; and a baby was screaming.
【主干】He had to wait... / The bleeding man was looking...; a woman was coughing...; and a baby was screaming.
【分层】what seemed like ages 是 what 引导的宾语从句,作 for 的宾语;分号连接三个并列的过去进行时画面。bleeding 现在分词作前置定语,next to him 介词短语作后置定语。
【翻译】他不得不在诊室里等,像是等了几个世纪。旁边那个流血的男人紧张地看表;一个女人咳得、喷嚏打得厉害;还有个婴儿在哭闹。
【考点】what 引导名词性从句(= something that);过去进行时铺陈背景画面;分号并列三个场景,是读后续写里极好用的“群像描写”句式。
【原句】Finally, after he had been waiting for about half an hour, he was called in for his consultation. The doctor was writing a note at her desk when he came in.
【主干】he was called in... / The doctor was writing a note...
【分层】after 从句用过去完成进行时;was called in 一般过去时被动语态;when he came in 是“正在做某事,这时……”的固定框架。
【翻译】等了大约半小时后终于轮到他就诊。他进门时,医生正伏案写着什么。
【考点】被动语态 be called in;was doing... when... 与 Story A 开篇同构,可对照记忆。
【原句】I will be working in the United States for three months. This time next week, I’ll be arriving in New York.
【主干】I will be working... / I’ll be arriving...
【分层】for three months 持续时间状语;This time next week 是将来进行时的典型时间标志。
【翻译】我要在美国连续工作三个月。下周的这个时候,我应该正飞抵纽约。
【考点】将来进行时 will be doing 表示“在将来某一时刻正在进行”或“按计划必然发生”,比一般将来时更有画面感与确定感。
【原句】I think what you need is a good laugh. That would do you a lot of good. A circus is performing in town. Why don’t you go to see it?
【主干】I think (that) what you need is a good laugh.
【分层】what you need 是主语从句,谓语用单数 is;a good laugh 中 laugh 作可数名词;would 表委婉推断;do sb good 固定搭配;Why don’t you... 反问式建议。
【翻译】我看你需要的是痛痛快快笑一场,那对你大有好处。城里正好有马戏团演出,你何不去看看?
【考点】what 引导主语从句 + 单数谓语;laugh 作名词;do sb good;Why don’t you do sth 建议句型。
【原句】I hear there’s an amazing clown who’ll really make you laugh. His name’s Grock.
【主干】I hear (that) there’s an amazing clown.
【分层】who’ll really make you laugh 定语从句修饰 clown;make sb do sth 使役结构;there’s 后接单数。
【翻译】我听说有个特别棒的小丑,保准能把你逗笑,他叫格罗克。
【考点】定语从句 + 使役动词;I hear (that)... 口语转述,that 常省略。
六、语法点清单(完成时态与将来进行时)
过去完成时:had had problems、his wife had left him、we’ve been very busy(现在完成)。表示“过去的过去”,是本篇最密集的考点。
过去完成进行时:had been going wrong、had been feeling depressed、had been waiting。强调动作在此前一直持续,常与 for + 时间段、after 连用。
现在完成进行时:I’ve been having a bit of a crisis、I’ve been doing a lot of work。强调从过去延续到现在,且可能还在继续。
过去进行时:was looking / was coughing / was screaming / was writing,用于铺陈背景画面;was doing... when... 固定框架。
将来进行时:I will be working...、This time next week, I’ll be arriving in New York。与 This time next week / at this time tomorrow 等时间状语连用。
名词性从句:what seemed like ages(宾从)、what you need(主从)、what’s the problem(疑问)。
定语从句:who’ll really make you laugh(修饰 clown)。
被动语态:he was called in for his consultation。
使役结构:make sb do sth;do sb good。
归拢后可以看出:过去完成时 / 过去完成进行时 + 将来进行时是这篇课文的两大语法主线。整篇几乎是一份“时态复习清单”,精读时把每个谓语画出来标时态,比背规则有效得多。
七、逻辑链
起因(第1段前半):middle-aged、very down、Everything had been going wrong、工作出问题、妻子离开。连续四个负面信息把“中年危机”钉死,且全部用过去完成时,说明这些麻烦都发生在“去看医生”之前。
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等待(第1段后半):候诊室群像——流血的男人不断看表、女人咳得厉害、婴儿哭闹。三个并列画面既拖长时间感(what seemed like ages),又暗示“这里人人都痛苦”,为结尾的普遍处境做铺垫。
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诊断(第2–3段):病人自述 a bit of a crisis、一直在忙;医生检查后说 everything is working OK,只有血压略高、呼吸沉重。身体的“没问题”与情绪的“很成问题”形成第一层反差:病不在身体,在生活。
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加压(第4段):即将赴美工作三个月、下周此时飞抵纽约。将来进行时把压力继续往前推,病人连“停下来休整”的余地都没有。
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处方(第5段):医生不给药,给的是 a good laugh;推荐马戏团的小丑 Grock,说他“能让你真正笑出来”。逻辑在这里看似圆满:缺什么补什么。
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反转(第6段):“I am Grock,” replied the man sadly。五个词推翻整段处方——他正是那个负责逗全世界笑的人。最会让人笑的人,自己笑不出来;医生开出的药,恰恰是病人每天都在生产、却唯独无法享用的东西。
与 Story A、B 并列看,本单元三则幽默故事共用一套结构:平淡铺垫 → 层层推进 → 结尾一句回收全部伏笔。区别只在反转的类型:A 是信息差倒置,B 是视角错位,C 是身份揭晓。读后续写里若要用幽默收尾,这三种模型可以直接套。
八、写作迁移(仿写与输出)
模板一:Everything had been going wrong for sb.(困境开篇)
课文句:Everything had been going wrong for him. He had had problems at work and his wife had left him.
仿写:Everything had been going wrong for me that week — I had missed the bus, failed the quiz and lost my notes.(那一周我诸事不顺:错过公交、测验没考好、笔记也丢了。)——读后续写开头交代处境,过去完成时能把时间线理得很清楚。
模板二:This time next week, I’ll be doing...(将来进行时写计划)
课文句:This time next week, I’ll be arriving in New York.
仿写:This time next month, I’ll be sitting in the exam hall, ready for the final paper.(下月的这个时候,我会坐在考场里,迎接最后一场考试。)——用于书信、计划类作文,比 I will 更有画面感。
模板三:Why don’t you do sth? / That would do you a lot of good.(提建议)
课文句:Why don’t you go to see it? That would do you a lot of good.
仿写:Why don’t you take a walk after supper? A little fresh air would do you a lot of good.(晚饭后何不散散步?透透气对你大有好处。)——建议信的得体句式,比 You should 更委婉。
模板四:主语从句 + 单数谓语(点睛判断)
课文句:I think what you need is a good laugh.
仿写:I think what matters most is not the result but the courage to try again.(我认为最要紧的不是结果,而是重新尝试的勇气。)——用于议论文点题、结尾升华。
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