一、心理描写 —— 让情感“看得见”
1. 悲伤与孤独
The last word went like a bullet to my heart.
最后一句话像子弹击中了我的心。
A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.
他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
The loneliness and grief came in waves.
孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。
She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine... and every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.
她想起阳光里闪耀的花儿……每一个夜晚,她埋头在枕头里哭,肝肠寸断。
Tears welled up in his eyes as the memory sparkled into his mind.
当记忆涌上心头,他的泪水夺眶而出。
2. 喜悦与温暖
He felt the warmth surging through his body.
他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.
当主持人宣布她获奖时,她激动得心砰砰跳。
Her pulses beat fast, and the blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.
她的心跳加快,热血温暖了身体的每个部位,使她身心完全放松。
3. 恐惧与紧张
At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
一看到那只凶猛的狼,我被深深的恐惧感控制,手心出汗。
Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert.
她的大脑快速运转,所有感官都处于戒备状态。
Even as I was digging into my pocket to get out my revolver, I made a running step back.
当我在口袋里掏出左轮手枪时,我后退了一步。
4. 愤怒与羞愧
Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.
她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她,像恶臭的气味将她包围。
So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她是如此羞愧,以至于脸如充血般发烫。
“In no way will I go back to that hell-like place!” he roared in his heart like a lion.
“我绝不回到那个鬼地方!”他在心里像狮子般怒吼。
二、动作描写 —— 让人物“活起来”
1. 愤怒与激动
He stormed out and slammed the door shut.
他怒气冲冲地跑了出去,把门重重关上。
“Here!” Alice jumped up and knocked over a basketful of apples.
“在这儿!”爱丽丝一跃而起,撞翻了一篮苹果。
He gave a jump in the air, twirled, ran a few steps, stopped, looked all around...
他蹦跶了一下,原地转圈,跑了几步,停下来四下张望……
2. 恐惧与紧张
Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart bumping nearly out of her chest.
珍妮慢慢走到讲台前,腿发抖,心都快跳出胸膛。
She choked and her eyes brimmed with tears.
她喉咙哽咽,眼里满是泪水。
3. 温柔与感动
She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它们紧紧抱在胸前,终于抬起头来,泪流满面地微笑着。
In between sobs I told her the story.
在啜泣之间,我向她讲述了这件事。
4. 快速与敏捷
Abel slammed his foot on the gas and shot up onto the grass.
阿贝尔猛踩油门,冲上了草坪。
Abel grabbed him, pulled him down and dragged him back.
阿贝尔抓住他,把他拉下来拖了回去。
5. 经典动作短语
She shot her a meaningful look.
她向她意味深长地看了一眼。
Beli’s diamond eyes locked on to her.
贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
Mary felt her heart race.
玛丽感到心跳加速。
His name had completely slipped from my memory.
他的名字,我竟忘得一干二净。
三、神态描写 —— 捕捉表情的瞬间
1. 微笑
The smile froze on her lips.
她脸上的笑容僵住了。
In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile.
尽管失望,他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
A gentle smile spread over her face.
整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
His face split into a wide smile.
他的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。
2. 凝视与注视
He glared at me silently.
他只是默默怒视着我。
He gazed at it, unbelieving.
他难以置信地盯着它看。
Her eyes were glued to the screen.
她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。
He gave a glimpse from the corner of his eye.
他用眼角瞥了一眼。
3. 哭泣
With tears streaming down her face, words failed her.
眼泪顺着她的脸流下来,她说不出话来。
Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.
当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时,双眼蒙上了一层水雾。
四、外貌描写 —— 用寥寥数笔勾勒形象
His sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers.
他那晒黑的脸庞和手臂,以及精瘦强壮的身体,就像千百万中国农民一样。
The tramp, a poor, homeless man with a moustache, wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat.
那个流浪汉,一个留着胡子、贫穷无家可归的人,穿着肥大的裤子、破旧的鞋子,戴着一顶黑色的小圆帽。
五、环境描写 —— 为故事渲染氛围
1. 明媚阳光
A bright light streamed through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling.
一道明亮的光线流过窗户,淹没了窗口,并在天花板上呈现一个光圈。
2. 宁静田野
It was a pleasant land of white houses, peaceful plowed fields and sluggish yellow rivers... The plantation clearings and miles of cotton fields smiled up to a warm sun.
这是一片安乐的土地,有白色的房屋、宁静的田野和黄泥河……垦地和棉花园对着温暖的太阳微笑。
3. 璀璨星空
The moon’s still pale light picked out vast sweeping stretches of distance, the grass shimmering and rippling like a restless sight, silver and white and grey.
静穆的月光照出广阔无垠的远方,微光扑朔的草地闪动着一派银色、白色、灰色。
4. 狂风暴雨
The moon was overcast. The sky writhed with clouds. All at once thunder and lightning began. The stalks of wheat bowed and the rain struck like a deluge.
月亮被遮蔽,乌云翻滚。骤然间雷电交加,麦秆弯折,暴雨如注。
As the night advanced, the clouds closing in and densely overspreading the whole sky, then very dark, it came on to blow harder and harder.
夜深了,乌云密布,笼罩天空,天色昏暗,风越刮越猛。
【万能句型模板】
心理描写模板
A ripple/wave/surge of + 情感 + welled up/ swept through + 人物
A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.
So + 形容词 + was/were + 主语 + that...
So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
At the sight of..., 主语 + was seized by + 情感
At the sight of the wolf, I was seized by horror.
动作描写模板
主语 + stormed out / dashed / shot + 介词短语
He stormed out and slammed the door.
With + 名词 + 现在分词, 主语 + 动词
With her legs trembling, Jenny walked to the front.
主语 + gave a jump / made a dash + and + 动作
He gave a jump in the air and ran off.
神态描写模板
A + 形容词 + smile + spread across / froze on + one‘s face
A gentle smile spread over her face.
One’s eyes + were glued to / locked on to + 名词
Her eyes were glued to the screen.
Tears + streamed down / welled up in + one’s eyes
Tears streamed down her face.
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